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Part #3 - Crash
Ekky Vengeance                   (User #8452) N/A 01/06/2011 05:11:56pm

Wow. That would suck. Great chapter.

Part #8 - Personal Guards
Hanny Gates                   (User #8413) N/A 01/03/2011 03:19:25am

Oh my!! That's... Wow
Poor Erin... !!
You've been updating a lot lately!!
Erin must be getting a lot of attention.. lol
Poor Johnny has been being neglected... I'll make it up to
him somehow... Haha
That was so cute!! David comforting Erin like that!!
I wish they were together for realsies! Like on the show!!
Lol.. All these fast updates are quite unusual for you...
Lol
But I like it!! :D

Part #7 - Eric Schleffer
Faith Sevenfold (Meghan)                   (User #8780) N/A 01/02/2011 05:50:57am

ooooh, this sounds SO good! I hope nothing happens to her daughters though :O and hopefully nothing happens to Erin either! I can't wait to find out what happens to Phillip!! Update soon; xoxo

Hanny Gates                   (User #8413) N/A 01/02/2011 05:13:09am

Oh my!! Lol...
Eric Schleffer... haha!! I still think that's funny...
Those scenes sound grody!! I would so not wanna be there!
It must smell horrible!! I don;t know how they can stand
it!! That would probably the main reason why i'd never get
that job... I would NOT be able to handle that raunchy
scent..
I ALMOST asked the people at Starbucks for something
sparkly yesterday.. It was so tempting!!!! But I thought
that I should wait until I was with you, then i wouldn't
feel so stupid.... Haha
I love that this update came so quick! And i can't wait for
the next one...
And did you really have to remind me.. I don;t wanna go
back to school!! D:
Haha :)

Part #6 - Starbucks!
Faith Sevenfold (Meghan)                   (User #8780) N/A 12/30/2010 05:49:35pm

Oooooh, suspense! haha awesome chapter ..Update soon; xoxo

Hanny Gates                   (User #8413) N/A 12/30/2010 10:53:35am

Lol! Spencers.. I LOVE that store!! And imagining Erin in
it is FUNNY!! And Jimmy, of course, would be all, OMG a FBI
agent!!! And YES!! You made Johnny a plant sitter!! I still
am not sure how that works, BUT I think it's funny..
I think that the guys would make a great twist in this
story!
Zacky is such a suck up!! He bought the same thing as
Erin.. Well, I mean, Johnny bought Zacky the same thing as
Erin with his plant money... Lol... Technically, money is a
plant, because it is made of wood, which comes from trees,
which is a plant.. Haha!!
That's all I have to say for now!! Well besides that i am
uberly excited for the future of this story!!

Part #5 - I Think I Saw Strauss!
Hanny Gates                   (User #8413) N/A 12/28/2010 05:32:50am

Haha! He got stuck with Spencer!!
I love Spencer! He's so cute!!
And then they ran into each other at IHop..
Yummmm.. IHop... Lol
That was funny in the hotel, he was like, OMG! Strauss!?
Because he though he saw her...
and then both him and Spencer saw her....
Erin is so Awesome!!! You have totally got me loving her!
I usually am not the one to favor the female characters,
But you have so got me loving Erin!!
Update soon girl!! I am quite excited to read more!! :)

Part #4 - Coping
Hanny Gates                   (User #8413) N/A 12/20/2010 05:47:22am

Haha... David's all confused and stuff.. Lol
I'm excited to read more of this! The future of this story
is still very well unknown to me... haha
That sentence sounded way too smarticle to be coming from
me.. Haha... Rak would be so proud... Haha... Actually, he
would probably tell me to shut up and to stop trying to
sound smart... lol.. Wanna know what's creepy.. I saw Dore
at Walmart!! And then it was awkward 'cause I saw Raven at
our crappy mall!! Lol Anyways, back to the review!! Haha
I am really glad that Erin is there with them now.. I
wonder what kind of things they'll do for distractions...
Update soon Kelly!! :)

Part #2 - Skittles
Ekky Vengeance                   (User #8452) N/A 12/05/2010 04:43:02am

Haha dude kelly I loved it

Part #3 - Crash
WishxOnxAxStar                   (User #9127) N/A 11/29/2010 04:03:12am

That sucks that their parents died. But it was a good
chapter. I really like this story please update it again
soon.

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