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BornInHeels                   (User #5334) N/A 09/28/2010 09:56:17pm

Oh this was amazing. I am sorry for my lack of reviews I've been away from fanworking for awhile.

I love your way with words. < 3

Dezzy                   (User #6892) N/A 09/24/2010 02:54:34pm

Excellent detail! It inspired me to write better as well. I mean, I could feel her pain.

This was so sad, that they love her and she loves Andy. I was surprised at the ending.
I agree with Sassy; genius on that last line.

Well done! ;D

MYFALLOUTBOYROMANCE                   (User #8435) N/A 09/24/2010 10:36:38am

Oh wow. That was really touching.
Brilliant attention to detail! i was there!
when it began i was thinking 'this is like something out of a modern version of a charles dickens book' thats how well you set the scene. great job!

Stump-o-matic-girl                   (User #7189) N/A 09/24/2010 07:23:22am

Loved it, and I have oddly enough, been listening to that song a random
number of times this week...

Sassy                   (User #8175) N/A 09/24/2010 06:51:07am

I loved it! The imagery was astonishingly good - I could see everything in so much detail. I also loved how you gave things different names to avoid repetition. Eg, you mention a blanket, but the second mention, it's a layer - perfect!
And the last line - genius!!

Sas x

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