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lol that was great.
even though you sort of know whats coming because of the story, its still really exciting and you put your own spin on it all which makes it really great to read!
Naww, I don't want Dina and Benzedrine to be apart!
And wow, what a twist! Sandman and the witch! Who knew?
Haha, "I'll Facebook you!" Fan-freakin-tastic!
Finally Mr Crab is in the picture! And he's from the real world!
So is Dina finally going home?
Aw, I don't want her to be away from Benzedrine but I'm sure Patrick is missing her...
Another great chapter! Update soon!
Sandman and the Wicked Witch dating! You know, it's weird, I really
didn't see that coming but now I think about who they are in the story
and real life, I feel I should have, but I guess that's how good a writer
you are that get pulled into the story and don't see what's coming!
I don't know if you've seen the stage show Wicked, but it also ties in with
Quite a remarkable chapter, with audible gasps from me as I read! But
the best bit is, I feel so flat by the end - just like the guys and Dina. The
emotion is positively contagious! I just want them to be happy!
I really can't wait for the next chapter.
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