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Sassy                   (User #8175) N/A 08/10/2010 09:22:53pm

Oh my word! This is amazing! This chapter had so many funny and
memorable bits in it I think I may have to go back and read it all again!!

Particularly brilliant lines:
"Have a heart!" and
"So lemme get this straight; You don't want brains and you don't want a
heart? You both just wanna beat up the Wizard?''

And, I'm thinking that Dr benzedrine might be a tad unhinged!
As fantastic as Patrick is (discuss amongst yourselves) I have to say, I adore
Mr Sandman - he's so funny!

I can't wait for the next instalment - I hope you're enjoying writing this as
much as we're enjoying reading it!!

Sas x

MYFALLOUTBOYROMANCE                   (User #8435) N/A 08/10/2010 08:27:54pm

lol i love this story so far (ive just read the whole thing so far) its hilarious lol
better than the original - funnier at least lol
stump haha
i think everyone would agree that it is hard not to babble about Patrick lol
great chapter, great story!
awesome work!

SoGoodInBlue                   (User #8390) N/A 08/10/2010 12:32:35pm

gahhhh!!! i love this. the stump made me laugh too :p
surprised about the whole him not being the wizard thing but i understand your logic...it would be nice to have him in the whole thing.
hes awesome as tinman anyway. sweet and cute and just oh so adorable....i'm gonna go and annoy people by babbaling about him now....
ahhh we all love him :D
AWESOME chapter.
update SOOONS!!!

SoGoodInBlue                   (User #8390) N/A 08/10/2010 11:23:41am

gahhhh!!! i love this. the stump made me laugh too :p
surprised about the whole him not being the wizard thing but i understand your logic...it would be nice to have him in the whole thing.
hes awesome as tinman anyway. sweet and cute and just oh so adorable....i'm gonna go and annoy people by babbaling about him now....
ahhh we all love him :D
AWESOME chapter.
update SOOONS!!!

*FolieBear*                   (User #8679) N/A 08/10/2010 04:13:50am

Hehe! He was sitting on a stump! I cracked up when I saw that!
And it was so cute when he was patting the dog!
I had originally thought that Trick would be like the lion, because in real life he's too scared to make a move on Dina... or is it just because she can't get involved with a client?
I don't know. Either way, I like him as the tin man.
But then, I'd like him as anything!
Hehe, I'm always babbling about how great he is too!
*sighs*
Anyways, great chapter missey!
Can't wait for your next chapter! :D

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