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Stump-o-matic-girl                   (User #7189) N/A 08/02/2010 04:59:38am

Great start! I can't wait to see where this ends up :)
I agree, the earthquake scene was very realistic... Little Jojo makes me
smile, I don't know why... And I also agree that the guys are pretty cute
in this so far too...
Dina's got it for Patrick... Ah, everyone falls for Patrick. ;p
can't wait for more!!

SoGoodInBlue                   (User #8390) N/A 08/01/2010 09:20:18am

well this is a weierd one...cant wait to read more!!!
not sure about how uptight dina is...those four will have to loosen her up a bit ;)
the earthquake was very realistic! well written!
i like this alot so far! update soon!
p.s great to hear about when you'll be updating BTL...it's like a drug for me now :P

*FolieBear*                   (User #8679) N/A 08/01/2010 09:16:53am

Oops! *delete the word Emma and insert Dina*

*FolieBear*                   (User #8679) N/A 08/01/2010 04:54:40am

Wow! That was fantastic! I really want to read more of this!
Haha, the guys were so cute in this.
And Emma seems pretty cool, despite her extreme stress and annoyance at the guys... well, except Patrick...
I really love this! Can't wait for the next chapter!

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