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Part #3 - Chapter Two
SoGoodInBlue                   (User #8390) N/A 08/05/2010 08:55:23am

WOWS.this is insane. so i fricken love it!
its different to hells neighbours. i never even gave it the thought that they were simalar.
i wondered if that was ashlee and jessica!!! welll...that was VERY smart of you.
and i also guessed that was sam!!!
my predictions; patrick could be the wizard? joe the tin man and andy the lion? or mabye the other way round.
you've written pete REALLY well. cute, cheeky, funny, handsome and helpful but resistant. well done!
yeah the memory loss is a vital for this i guess. it would of been a bit unrealistic otherwise....
not that a fairytale land of munchkins, witches, wizards, scarcrows that can talk and magic is realistic....
BUT i'm really getting into this!!!
awesome job!

Stump-o-matic-girl                   (User #7189) N/A 08/05/2010 02:20:57am

This is funny! I like it alot.
I can't wait for more, and we know you didn't steal
anything from anyone. This is completely different and both stories rock!
Awesome as usual :)

I WONDERED if it was *Sam*!
Way to sneak her in there.

Now I wonder just who will each of the other characters
will be. Before you started this one, I thought maybe
Patrick would have been scarecrow, just becuase in the
original Dorothy was especially fond of him, and Dina
likes Patrick... but now I'm like... Hmmm..? just what
will happen now? *darts eyes around*

I always laughed that Dorothy didn't get that they looked
just like the farmers. I'm thinking HELLO! but when I was really really young I didn't make the connection at first.
LOL. We'll give her the benefit of being so traumatized by
flying around inside a tornado. Ha ha ha.

*FolieBear*                   (User #8679) N/A 08/04/2010 08:02:06pm

Woohoo! Chapter two!
Lovin' it! Pete was so funny in this!
I do see where you're going with this... and I love it!
I don't really have time to do one of my usual long reviews right now, but, I just wanna say, this story looks like it's gonna be fantastic, and I can't wait for your next update!
:D

Part #2 - Chapter One
Stump-o-matic-girl                   (User #7189) N/A 08/02/2010 04:59:38am

Great start! I can't wait to see where this ends up :)
I agree, the earthquake scene was very realistic... Little Jojo makes me
smile, I don't know why... And I also agree that the guys are pretty cute
in this so far too...
Dina's got it for Patrick... Ah, everyone falls for Patrick. ;p
can't wait for more!!

Sassy                   (User #8175) N/A 08/01/2010 02:09:58pm

Looks like this is going to be a fantastic read! Really looking forward to
more of it :D
Excellent so far - I like your characterisation.

Sas x

Part #2 - Chapter One
SoGoodInBlue                   (User #8390) N/A 08/01/2010 09:20:18am

well this is a weierd one...cant wait to read more!!!
not sure about how uptight dina is...those four will have to loosen her up a bit ;)
the earthquake was very realistic! well written!
i like this alot so far! update soon!
p.s great to hear about when you'll be updating BTL...it's like a drug for me now :P

*FolieBear*                   (User #8679) N/A 08/01/2010 09:16:53am

Oops! *delete the word Emma and insert Dina*

*FolieBear*                   (User #8679) N/A 08/01/2010 04:54:40am

Wow! That was fantastic! I really want to read more of this!
Haha, the guys were so cute in this.
And Emma seems pretty cool, despite her extreme stress and annoyance at the guys... well, except Patrick...
I really love this! Can't wait for the next chapter!

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