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burymestanding                   (User #7433) N/A 08/20/2010 05:53:05am

SO MUCH DRAMA *wipes forehead*

I cannot wait for more of this. SO CAN I HAVE
MORE, PLEASE? *begs*

Lanii                   (User #8466) N/A 08/06/2010 01:08:41pm

Wow!!
Amazing well done!!!
I don't know what to say!!!
You are a genius!!!!
Update???
:)

amethyst9008                   (User #7575) N/A 07/28/2010 06:38:43am

HEY! I was finally able to use the computer yay! Now as for the story, awsome job, it was scary to read the dream sequence, if thats how u spell it, i almost thought it was real, like how could he just give her to that horrible bitch! But im glad it was just a dream. :) AS for the pete and bree and Andy? Sweet but its hard cause shes having a conflict with herself about who to be with and what the right thing is, other than that, great story, and i cant wait for the next chappie :)

*FolieBear*                   (User #8679) N/A 07/28/2010 04:39:52am

Ohmyfreakinggoodness! This is SO crazy!!!!!
I'll focus on the not good situations first.
AAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!! Andy and Pete? Both of them? Dude, Bree is probably going to get pregnant, but which one will be the father?
I can't believe Pete did that! Why didn't he just stay with Patrick?
I was friggin terrified when he found the box!
Oh my freakin goodness! It's insane!!!
And Sam's dream was so scary! I thought it was real and I almost started crying and then he was there in real life and he was so supportive and sweet and Sam would've felt so guilty and I just felt so bad for everyone!
Okay... positives...
Awww!!! Patrick and Sam are SO cute!
"I'm not nervous." AWWWW!!!

SoGoodInBlue                   (User #8390) N/A 07/27/2010 09:10:06pm

THAT WAS A BATCRAP CRAZY CHAPTER!
1) i'm british and proud of my snotty accent :) i bet bree's impression is'nt a patch on my real one :p
2) sams dream. I PANICKED SO BADLY thinking it was real :'( seriously. i nearly cried.
3) andy AND pete? go bree! but tut tut. i have a feeling this is going to end very badly for her. btw that was fuckin HOT! with wentzy.
4) the hotdog part. memories. :) brought a slight tear to my eye too!
5) i laughed at the coversation decideing where sam would sleep. bless patrick and his obsession with shoes!
6) if they made this into a soap I WOULD TOTALLY WATCH IT or even better; fall out boy- the movie!
7) you completley deserve to have that many reveiws!!!
8) thanks for the mention!!! meant alot. :)
9) i will be so sad to see this finish. this is easily the best fall out boy fic i've EVER read.
10) was there any significance in trying to update on the 26th?

amazing chapter, update soon!!!

Stump-o-matic-girl                   (User #7189) N/A 07/27/2010 08:10:29pm

Oooooohhhh MG!!!!!!! :o
Holy-freaking-crap batman, that was INSANE!
Sooo much going on.
I got a bad feeling about the events that have just transpired with Bree
and both Andy and Pete... Ummm... Damn, I see a mess coming.
Scary stuff Sam was dreaming! I have no idea what she's going to do
about the whole being a closet fan thing... That was a scary dream :(
I think she's such a great match for Patrick though :)
this is such excellent writing. Everyone is developed and played out so
well, I'm happy for you... You totally-obviously deserve those triple digits!
Great job! I will be sad to see this one end but it's so good... I'll keep it
forever in my favs.
(nice smut too) lol.
Kudos dear, kudos!

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