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Part #21 - Chapter Eighteen
Hallie Vengeance                   (User #8309) N/A 11/05/2010 09:02:41pm

I don't think they even understand themselves!! Heheh!!
I love love love it!!!
I think I've become addicted!!
Thanks a lot internet!!
I didn't need anymore of those!! T.T
Sigh oh well.
I can't wait for the next one sweets!!!

itsvickyy                   (User #7605) N/A 11/05/2010 02:10:58am

HAHAHA.
boys are definitely confusing.
Matt was so funny.
I'm glad Summer and Hannah somewhat resolved things.
and oh yes, joke on me and my living on the edge lifestyle
hahaha.
:)
update soon pleasee :D

Hanny Gates                   (User #8413) N/A 11/04/2010 04:08:09am

Haha.. Wow
I an't really say much right now...
And i'm sorry i am giving you such a shitty review
I'm tired and I promise to make it up in the next one!
Update soon hun!

CutieMcfoREVer                   (User #7197) N/A 11/04/2010 01:31:20am

Oh dude everyone was either pissed or guity. haha
And yay Matt didn't kick Brian's ass! :)
That's good then. haha

Great chapter
update soon

Summer                   (User #8463) N/A 11/03/2010 08:33:03pm

hahaa, it was no problem :D i loved reading it!
I have to admit this chapter made me laugh A LOT.
I liked how I just went and hit Hannah out of nowhere :L
And then Matt went and hit Brian when he wasn't expecting it :')
That made me giggle so much! I'm so childish.
"Dude you slept with my girlfriend, that is so un-cool.
That line made me laught too :') "that is so un-cool"
Just such a casual word in an angry sentence :L
Sounds so much like Matt :') hahaaa.
And finally, I don't think i'll ever understand boys either. They're so messed up tbh. xD
Anyways, enough ramble! Update soooon?? x :D

allybaby                   (User #8922) N/A 11/03/2010 08:21:25pm

haha i'll never understand boys either
so i'd have to agree with Hannah there. xD
but i loved the update.
i can't wait to read what happens next.
update soon!

WishxOnxAxStar                   (User #9127) N/A 11/03/2010 08:08:03pm

Love it. Update it as soon as you can.

Part #20 - Chapter Seventeen
Summer                   (User #8463) N/A 10/23/2010 01:22:11am

Awwwh! Matts so sweet and forgiving!
Whilst I was reading I had butterflies the entire time!
Just such a good story line!
I'm wonder if Brian's going to be a dick to me when telling
me about Hannah and him. Hmmm.
Also, what's Matt gunna go to Brian? O:
Should be very interesting! xD and violent...? Maybe just a
lot of cussing? ahaa!
Anyways,
I bet i've spammed your inbox with my reviewing xD But I just
can't help but keep reading! and I owed it to you to actually
read this for you actually choosing me to be in this!
And I shall from now on be checking this story regularly.
I've saved it in my bookmarks! xD
Finally, Update soon?!!? (:
I'm in love with this! xD
I spent my evening reading this and now i need more! ahaa xx

Part #19 - Chapter Sixteen
Summer                   (User #8463) N/A 10/23/2010 01:14:42am

AGGHH! gaah noo! D:
Sad chapter!
They cheated, but I do have to agree with Brian on this.
Hannah and Brian are like, made for one another.
They fit together perfectly!
Hannah knows it and wants him more than Matt. She knows it.
Brian loves Hannah way more than me obviously! xD ahaa.
I'm unloved! sad times ); Ahhhwells. Brian & Hannah = BETTER!
Next chapter :D

Part #18 - Chapter Fifteen
Summer                   (User #8463) N/A 10/23/2010 01:09:37am

BAD BRIAN BAD!
Although i kind of want myself to walk in on them and be all
like O: omg! but then all, merrh it was gunna happen anyways.
Ahaa, that'd be so cool. ahaa xD
Although, Brian shouldn't be pressuring her. I mean she does
like Matt!
Silly hot stupid brian. xD

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