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burymestanding                   (User #7433) N/A 06/14/2010 06:42:09am

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE *spazzes*

(also, this is really good. AND SUSPENSE-FUL!)

UP PAST BED TIME                   (User #8727) N/A 05/23/2010 05:43:24pm

Update please

SoGoodInBlue                   (User #8390) N/A 05/23/2010 03:56:16pm

WHAT THE FUCK???
poor sam!!! poor bree!!! sweet little patrick!!!
UPDATE ASAP FOR THE SAKE OF MY SANITY PLEASE!!!

fishingnuns                   (User #7507) N/A 05/17/2010 11:03:54pm

HOLY FUCKING SHIT.
NEXT CHAPTER.
LIKE, YESTERDAY. PLEASE.
:O

stump-o-matic-girl                    (ANONYMOUS) N/A 05/17/2010 12:39:51pm

HOLY-EFFING-SHIT! where the hell did this come from??!?!??!
Great chapter... but damnit! poor sam! I feel absolutely crushed for her, how scarey. You're detail was just flippin' AMAZING!
I'm so sad/scared/confused/all the bad emotions- for sam! And Bree and Patrick have to be just... OH man...

Great stuff.
PLEASE OH PLEASE let her get away!
:'(

Lanii                   (User #8466) N/A 05/17/2010 10:33:15am

0mg!!!! Let her get away!!!! Please!?!?!? Whaaa I started crying when
the clorophome came in but then she got kidnaped!!!!!


P.s awesome chpt but please take my plea into consideration??


Xo

*FolieBear*                   (User #8679) N/A 05/17/2010 04:33:44am

wah! why does this have to happen to Sam?
she's such a sweet girl, it's so unfair!
poor Patrick, poor Bree.
I started crying when Bree asked "where's my baby?"
yet another amazing, tension building, terrifying, hillarious, tear wrenching chapter.
can't wait for your next update. x

ps. thanks for the congrats! i've started writing something, so I hope you'll read it when it's posted. XD

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