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Part #22 - Forgiveness
Hanny Gates                   (User #8413) N/A 09/17/2010 12:00:07am

I am so excited!! I miss this story!!!
Please Update ASAP!!! :)

Part #21 - So Much For That.
Fedora                   (User #8428) N/A 06/05/2010 08:58:39pm

very well written chp.
sorry i didn't review the last
i wanted to cry at the end of this one though...
please update soon!

Built For Syn                   (User #8500) N/A 06/05/2010 09:23:17am

Omg, that was SO well written, and sooo sad! Honey, I'm proud of you! You know how to create drama...

I almost had tears in my eyes, it was so moving... ):

Well done, fantastic, can't wait to see what happens and whatever you have up your sleeve, x

Hanny Gates                   (User #8413) N/A 06/05/2010 04:06:16am

At first I was like
Yay!!! She's prego!
But then Bri had to be an ass
and now the baby is gone...
That's horrible!!!
And it makes me so sad!!!
Please Update soon!!

Part #20 - You Gotta Be Shitting Me!
Built For Syn                   (User #8500) N/A 06/04/2010 08:29:56pm

Oh god no...

You did it, you got pregnant. After I warned you in the last review! I mean this is so STEREOTYPICAL fan story. You're engaged, gonna have a kid, get married and live happily. ever. after.

See, when I first read this, I thought it was a great idea, long lost sister! Never read anything like that...and now its turning into one of those stories.

You got a chance girl, you can pull this out the gutter and save it, you know...some drama? Maybe loose the baby? False pregnancy? You and Brian are hurt but get through as an even stronger couple? You have the chance to save this...

If this ends like every other story then I will have lost all faith in this story! You're plot is going downhill! And I'm loosing respect!

Other than that, chapter was well written, laid out and generally great.

Please don't let me down, update soon (:

Part #19 - The Big Night
Built For Syn                   (User #8500) N/A 05/28/2010 05:59:49pm

Haha! Bri Bear...haha, lol!

Aw, I KNEW they'd show up! They just had to because it was one of those things, like in a movie, it's SOOO predictable but if it didn't happen it would just be crap...

And wow! Brian asked her to marry him?! After what? A few months or was it less? Wow... was cute.

So, is the story drawing to a close or have you lots more action planned? I hope it doesn't turn into one of those, 'engaged, then i married him then i get pregnant and we start a happy little family' stories. You better have an ORIGINAL plot line made up!

Update soon!

Hanny Gates                   (User #8413) N/A 05/28/2010 04:12:08am

Yay!!! They showed up!!
And then Bri asked her to marry him!!!
I am so happy that they are engaged!!!
That's so sweet that they planned
it all like that!!
i loved this chapter!!
It was adorable!!
Please Update soon!!!

Part #18 - The Call
Hanny Gates                   (User #8413) N/A 05/28/2010 04:02:47am

Sorry I didn't review sooner!!
ANd that sucks that Zacky and
the rest of the A7X crew doesn't
get to see her dance thingy!!
I hope they find a way
to be there to see it!!

Part #19 - The Big Night
Fedora                   (User #8428) N/A 05/28/2010 02:17:23am

amazing chapter

they showed up! he asked her to marry him!

so sweet!

love this story! was actually listening to welcome home while reading it

update soon please!

Part #18 - The Call
Fedora                   (User #8428) N/A 05/27/2010 01:54:37pm

that's so sad that they won't be able to make it back :(
awesome chapter!
update soon please!

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