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Part #26 - Chapter 24: The End!
Built For Syn                   (User #8500) N/A 07/19/2010 08:34:49am


That was a fantastic ending! Really really really awesome ending to a really really awesome story! I just came on and saw you'd posted things and got excited :D And I just saw your new story and I'm gonna go read!!!

Just...this was...perfect (:

synsterr                   (User #7349) N/A 07/19/2010 03:07:32am

I'm so sad its over!! I LOVED this story!!!
But cmon with the ending!! Lol.. did they get married?? Did
Dominic and Maggie and James ever go onto bigger and better
things?? What about Zack & Cassie? Ugh. Ahahaha.
Regardless... fantastic story!!! Love, love, love, loved it! :P

Part #25 - Chapter 23
synsterr                   (User #7349) N/A 07/19/2010 02:59:10am

That was a sad chapter.. Brian's been so supportive, and the most
awesome boyfriend, so you can't really ask him to be more
understanding. Hard to keep up a real relationship when you don't
ever see each other.. 10 times in two years? That's only 5 times a
year.. :/

Gonna go read the ending!! :)

Part #24 - Chapter 22
synsterr                   (User #7349) N/A 07/19/2010 02:50:47am

That last line definitely makes you wonder.. haha.
But that was so nice of Brian!! Very awesome.. if it wasn't for
Maggie being so paranoid, that'd really be the way to win your
girlfriend's friends over. :P

And about her toothpaste commercial shoot? I bet her teeth were
REALLY clean after

Great chapter :)

Part #26 - Chapter 24: The End!
V. Nicole                   (User #8301) N/A 07/19/2010 01:40:28am

A new car?? And a car like that, hot damn I wish he was
mine :)
It's over! :(
But that is okay because you really made it with these
two stories.

Congrats on such successful work, girlie(:

Part #25 - Chapter 23
V. Nicole                   (User #8301) N/A 07/18/2010 11:28:16am

Ali needs to think more of her extremely hottie boyfriend.
I know she loves him. but I am not a happy camper when
he's upset :c
So she should go and see him, right NOW(:

is like whirring and ticking in anticipation

Part #24 - Chapter 22
V. Nicole                   (User #8301) N/A 07/18/2010 11:26:04am

Yes, he can be obsessed over getting her back to HB
with him because he L O V E s her sooo much!!!
He is such the gentlemen, paying for her AND her roommates
who he probably isn't fond of and he helped them too.
Wow. He's so thoughtful :D

Part #23 - Chapter 21
V. Nicole                   (User #8301) N/A 07/18/2010 11:24:31am

Oh fuck. Girl is crazy for letting him down :D
haha kidding of course.
Ali just is more into her job at the moment because
she is trying to fulfill her dreams when he already is
so I think that's why it can come off as that, maybe?
The end conversation = PRICELESS

Part #22 - Chapter 20
V. Nicole                   (User #8301) N/A 07/18/2010 11:22:49am

I want one :)
Oh mah gosh, that whole part was fucking lovely.

Cassie's stripper comment was VERY hilarious and the
guys' reactions

Part #21 - Chapter 19
V. Nicole                   (User #8301) N/A 07/18/2010 11:20:45am

(I need to stop saying that, honestly, sorry if that gets
annoying) Heheh
Trip back home, yes, I enjoyed this a lot because it was
refreshing to see them two just enjoy each other
of course she has to go back. Waaah

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