oky def like this story so far!!!!! sorry i just read the whole thing tongiht and
And I agree with all the other reviewers!
this is really good!
and alaska, thats an awesome place to start out in a story.
i was born there on a military base when my dad was in the airforce,
i can realte perfectly with the girls pov on how weird it is coming back home
going to read more :)
Agreed with the other reviews, your writing is very detailed.
which is great!
I loved how they were stumbling on the beach drunk and Matt
fell on her. priceless.
but anyways, you must update this soon!
|Built For Syn
This is realy good, your writing is very descriptive yet not boring at the same time (:
They guys all sound really normal, as if they would be like that...and lots of lines made me smile even though they are not actually meany to be really funny!
This is great, am looking forward to see where it is going! (:
I like this story a lot. You're detailed with everything, and made
everyone have conversation, without obviously trying too hard to
make them sound funny, or witty. So good job. :)
And pretty funny.. as I'm reading, I read the part where you
mentioned seeing sober girls at 3 AM on PCH was uncommon, and
I literally said out loud "Hey!"... cause its actually the opposite, for
the most part. Anyway.. it was funny cause I got some WTF looks.
Keep up on this story. Ill definitely read. :)