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Part #9 - VIII: Romeo And Julie Of Our Time
Lil_Miss_Vengeance                   (User #7532) N/A 09/07/2010 08:16:54am

Oh shit!!! he has a kid?!
Is she gonna help him?
Awesome update.
Next chapter soon please,
I can't wait to find out what happens!!

allybaby                   (User #8922) N/A 09/06/2010 10:48:14pm

oh fuck now he has a kid?
i wonder if shes gonna help him.
amazing update.
i can't wait for the next chapter. (:

Part #8 - VII: Bet You Wish You Had Me Back
allybaby                   (User #8922) N/A 09/01/2010 07:12:52pm

well Zack really fucked up.
its a good idea for her though.
she can't handle it. which i dont blame her.

i loved the update.
please update again soon!

Part #7 - VI: And The Door It Opens Is The Way Back In
JulietGates3088                   (User #7300) N/A 08/30/2010 05:30:45am

AWHHH!!
I love Johnny!!
Im glad she yelled at Zacky
I agree with ally, hes a fucking idiot

this was a great update
update when you can please! :)
X

track_it                   (User #8625) N/A 08/29/2010 11:32:57pm

awwww johnny and jimmy!!!!!!!!!
i love those boys:) haha usually johnnys the annoying little guy its refreshing to
see him like this!
and jimmy. ill always love that boy:)
zacks a dousche.
nothign else to say:) haha update soon!

Part #7 - VI: And The Door It Opens Is The Way Back In
allybaby                   (User #8922) N/A 08/29/2010 11:17:50pm

i loved that update.
i bet you both of them would be
good guys to talk to about shit.

Zack is an idiot.

please update again soon !

Part #6 - V: This Is My Last Resort
track_it                   (User #8625) N/A 08/28/2010 07:51:41am

holy. shit.
zacks a DICK!!!
i cant beleive him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
okay omg im so mad at him right now. i am so poroud of scar for not hearing
his bullshit excuse.
matt was cute in this. but i hope he doenst give up val for her!!!!! cause thatd
be crazy drama!
but ugh zackary. he best yet be falling at her feet apologising for the rest of
the tour. and not get ANY hhah stupid zack.
update SOON!!!

Part #5 - IV: Just Another Nancy Boy
track_it                   (User #8625) N/A 08/28/2010 07:49:59am

uh oh....zackary is breaking the stupid promise he made early on!!!!!! stupid
dumbass ill be so pissed at him.
just cause scar isnt a whore zacks getting all fiesty. get the fuck over it baker
ha!

Part #4 - III: No One Can Touch Us
track_it                   (User #8625) N/A 08/28/2010 07:49:05am

okay "a friendly kiss" hahhaah wtf zack thats so funny!
brian and jimmy are freaking hillarious!! like thats EXACTLY how i imagine
those two together! "ostriches shit 20 kilo babies!" hahahah bry omg i love
jimmy in this especailly. hes adorable:)

love thiss tory muchos:) cant wait to see wat goes down on tour!

Part #3 - II: I Tried To Be Perfect, But Nothing Was Worth It
track_it                   (User #8625) N/A 08/28/2010 07:47:00am

the surfing part is straight adorable. you are a great writer and i loved this
chapter alot!!!
i was smiling so much of this chapter:)

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