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Part #3 - The Message
UP PAST BED TIME                   (User #8727) N/A 05/20/2010 04:48:03am

Update soon I can wait to see where this goes

Hanny Gates                   (User #8413) N/A 05/07/2010 03:12:06am

ohhhhh....
i love this!!
It's so awesome!!
And I can't wait
to see what those ideas are!!!
So please update soon!!
:D

Built For Syn                   (User #8500) N/A 05/04/2010 08:53:42am

This is really good...

And I love the suspense! Since we still have no idea who took them, why they took them, where they are taking them...!

And that's such a shame that they shot that little boy right there.

This is all very interesting as it seems you took the guys off the tour bus...so they are still in a band. Yet it somehow has a slightly historic feel to it, as though its in the past... Am I talking crap? I usually am, haha.

I really like it anyways!

And cast call sounds good :D

Update soon (:

I'mTheFuckingWildOne                   (User #7342) N/A 05/04/2010 12:10:09am

Interesting...
I cannot wait see where this goes.


Update soon!

Part #2 - Taken (intro)
Built For Syn                   (User #8500) N/A 05/01/2010 08:16:23pm

Oh my god...the guys are taken away in cages?!

So, smoke, guns, big bad guys, kidnapping, cages, army trucks...mwa ha ha, I loved it!

You need to update, the shortness made me need more!!! :D

Bruu                   (User #8344) N/A 05/01/2010 08:06:18pm

Ooh! mistery!

loved! update soon!

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