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Part #5 - Our Soul
Hanny Gates                   (User #8413) N/A 05/26/2010 11:53:24pm

Cliffhanger!!!!
Bad news???
That sounds bad...
Lol
:D
I wonder what this bad new could be...
Please update soon!!!!!
=]

Built For Syn                   (User #8500) N/A 05/26/2010 08:42:28pm

BAD NEWS?

Fedora                   (User #8428) N/A 05/26/2010 05:25:17pm

great chapter
update soon please!
what is going on in the end of the chapter?

Summer                   (User #8463) N/A 05/26/2010 03:57:33pm

:) Awwwh, all the couples are so cute.
And I'm glad Zack's so supportive :D
Vicky ad Joel in shakeaway was like LOL. But so adorable. :D
And Johnnys such a perv. And sick in the head as said hahaa. And what the hell was going on at the end :o OH EM GEEEEE.
If I was Tara I wouldn't have forgiven Matt easily.Getting ready is important! To us girls lol.

UPDATE SOON!

Part #4 - Our Dream
itsvickyy                   (User #7605) N/A 05/21/2010 09:53:02pm

Hahaha Lauren singing was hilarious.
and I'm about to give it up to Joel..sexy hahaha
update soon!
can't wait to read more!

Part #3 - Our Life
itsvickyy                   (User #7605) N/A 05/21/2010 09:49:47pm

great story!
I kept laughing at Matt and the brick. that was hilarious.
but yayy, i'm in :)
update soon!

Part #4 - Our Dream
Hanny Gates                   (User #8413) N/A 05/21/2010 04:17:51am

This chapter was great!!
I look forward to readin' more!!
Please Update Soon!!!

Fedora                   (User #8428) N/A 05/21/2010 01:09:40am

great chapter
update soon please!

Summer                   (User #8463) N/A 05/20/2010 09:12:40pm

Im pregnant?!? And want to keep it?!? Ahh jeeze! omg!
At least it's Zackys (:
And what the hell is going on with me :O
I'm like an alcoholic freak haha. Ahh well ;]
Haha.
And Brian and Lauren are like ADORABLE!
I'm jealous tbh. lol.

My favorite part was Lauren singing haha. Bless!

UPDATE SOON!

Part #3 - Our Life
Fedora                   (User #8428) N/A 04/25/2010 08:49:27pm

amazing first chapter
update soon please

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