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Part #4 - Packing
Built For Syn                   (User #8500) N/A 05/08/2010 08:40:25pm

Awesome,
Your chapters are short...but well written (:

Update soon :D

Summer                   (User #8463) N/A 05/08/2010 04:51:53pm

Lol!
I love it so far(:
You better hurry up and update!
I wanna read about her with them on tour xD

Hanny Gates                   (User #8413) N/A 04/18/2010 10:25:04pm

Haha!!
I LOVE tazers!!!
Yo Fluf!! Update Soon!! haha

Part #3 - The Phone Call
Hanny Gates                   (User #8413) N/A 04/18/2010 10:23:02pm

Tazer!! Lol
Nice one FLUFFY!!!
Haha... I called you fluffy!!!
On the internet!!! :D

Part #4 - Packing
Coltrain                   (User #8653) N/A 04/18/2010 09:54:52pm

Not bad
Hurry and update again!

Part #3 - The Phone Call
Coltrain                   (User #8653) N/A 04/18/2010 08:03:33pm

Nice! You just had to include the tazer lol. its pretty good so far. cant wait to read the next one :D

Part #2 - The Begining ( Prologue)
Coltrain                   (User #8653) N/A 04/18/2010 03:43:08am

Not much to review. But what you have is pretty good. Ill let you know when you update it :)

Hanny Gates                   (User #8413) N/A 04/17/2010 04:04:30pm

Ahhhh!!!! YAY!!!
You finally posted!!!
Like I've been telling you
to do for the past month or two..
=]
I already told you what I thought about this...
Haha
And I'm excited to read more..!
So Update soon!!! :D

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