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Part #12 - Tonight It Begins
Hanny Gates                   (User #8413) N/A 05/14/2010 02:32:20am

Hannie did trick them!!!
It makes me feel ashamed
to have that nickname!!
Just mine is spelled H-A-N-N-Y
Lol
And they have Bri now! D:
I hope Johnny, Ciara, and Zack
can get to them on time!!!
I don't want Matt, Jimmy, and Bri to die!!!
And I loved this chapter!!
And you write amazingly!!
Please Update soon!!!
I can't wait to find out what will happen!!
:D

Part #11 - Plans, Shocks, And Dragons
Hanny Gates                   (User #8413) N/A 04/26/2010 01:28:10am

Haha.... That was awesome!!
I love dragons!!!
:D
And I think Hannie is gonna end up
using them to get herself out of there....
If only matt would listen to Jimmy....
but you never know.... i may be wrong...
This chapter was awesome... And I loved it!
Update soon please!!
=]

Part #10 - Demons And Cells
Hanny Gates                   (User #8413) N/A 04/15/2010 02:04:04am

Oh my God!!!
That was awesome!!!
What's gonna happen to Matt and Jimbo???
And Hannie..... I'm curious of what she'll do...
Johnny.... That is a good question...
Where should he end up???
It depends on if you want something bad to happen..
or if you want something good to happen....
If you want good then he can go down and find
an old guy with a really long beard named Ralph
or something like that... And Ralph could help the guys.
and be all wise and stuff.
Or it could be a trap and Johnny could get captured
by the evil peoples to try and lure Bri, Jimmy, Matt,
and Zack...
That would be interesting.... :D
Anyways... Yeah...
Update soon please!!! =]

Part #9 - The Creeper Appears
Hanny Gates                   (User #8413) N/A 04/09/2010 03:15:30am

Oh no!!!
Who was that that Jimmy and Matt went with???!
And where are they headed??!
It worries me....
i have a really bad feeling that
something bad is going to happen with that....
And the prank still worked on Johnny!!!
Haha!
That' so funny!!!
I REALLY hope that Matt and Jimmy are
gonna be okay in the end....
It would be very interesting if
something bad did happen to them,
even though I don't want it to...
Can't wait to see what happens!!!!!
Update soon!!!!

Part #8 - Lost
Hanny Gates                   (User #8413) N/A 04/07/2010 03:15:07am

Oh no....
Jimmy and Matt are lost...
And Johnny and Bri left them.... D:
I hope they'll be alright..
please don't let anything too bad
happen to them...
That would make me sad...
Haha.... This chapter was great!!!
And I can't wait to find out what happens
to Matt and Jimmy....
Update Soon!! :D

Part #7 - Revenge Begins
Hanny Gates                   (User #8413) N/A 04/04/2010 04:04:52am

This wasn't too bad..
And sorry. i don't have any suggestions.
Update soon!!!
And hope your computer gets better...! :D

Part #6 - The Betrayed Angel
Hanny Gates                   (User #8413) N/A 03/29/2010 09:12:03pm

this was a good chapter....
Some =times it's good for a chapter to have no humor...
This story is so interesting! I love it!
Please update soon!!
And thank you for reviewing on my story!!!! :D

Part #4 - Chapter 3
Hanny Gates                   (User #8413) N/A 03/25/2010 01:41:08am

It wasn't a bad chapter...
I liked it!
And I like this story!
It's really good!
And I hope your writers block doesn't stop you from writing it!
That would be bad!
'Cause this is a very interesting story!
I love it!
Please update soon!!! :D

Part #3 - Promises And Craziness
Hanny Gates                   (User #8413) N/A 03/20/2010 02:40:33pm

This is really good....
I really enjoyed reading it... =]
Pkease update soon! :D

Part #2 - Jimmy Doesn't Listen To Orders
syko_bri                    (ANONYMOUS) N/A 03/17/2010 05:14:28am

that is so good! you have to keep writing! are you going to write for the other members of the band?

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