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Liera                   (User #9529) N/A 01/01/2011 05:19:40am

It was a perfect gooey :) i so really L-OV-ED this! Again, it has made my night ^_^ especially after the 2 shifts i've worked today and the fact that i have to open in the morning for my first time everr! Anyways, HAPPY NEW YEAR!!! Considering i have made this comment exactly on new year 2011 :) Anyways, omgarsh, i was rolling when Brian had called. That was fan-fucking-tastic! He's the perve for not hanging up lol XD

Haylie Jaed                   (User #3426) N/A 04/13/2010 05:01:56am

Well, that was interesting. XD I almost pity Brian for what he had to listen to, but it's his own fault that he didn't hang up the damn phone. (PERVERT.) I'm amazed that the pair of them were still walking at the end of all that, let alone still awake. Duracell Bunnies. XD

Three more to go... =)

xoxo
HJ.

synsterr                   (User #7349) N/A 03/12/2010 04:03:02am

NEVER sick of the word love. :)

That chapter was so great!! It reeked love, and funny-ness!! The
funny-ness being everyone else and how grossed out they are. XD
They should give em a break.. I'm sure they were the SAME way
when they first met their respective others! LOL. But its okay,
cause its pretty funny at the same time.
And.. I think I just repeated myself right there.. but whatever!
Hahaha.

So great!!! And I'm all caught up with the story!!!! Woohooo!!! :D

Preddy                   (User #8465) N/A 03/09/2010 02:00:20pm

hahaha i laughed a lot when brian was on the phone!
amazing chap. can't wait to read the next one!

AlianaBanks                   (User #8475) N/A 03/04/2010 07:42:49pm

Well, you can definitely write a good sex scene! And the lovey dovey stuff was wonderful too. ;)

haleyhollows                   (User #7133) N/A 03/04/2010 06:58:22pm

See, you describe sex okay. I've read some shit, and its like...uh...weird hahaha. you make
it sound like something that you could tell your parents lmao :D

this was really good :) drama free is nice for a change :)

LEADSAILSpaperanchor                   (User #8343) N/A 03/04/2010 04:13:51pm

hahaha very graphic .. in the most sensual way of course. i
loved brian's phone call and the reaction he had to it.
classic. and the surfboard thing was beyond adorable. update
soon. :)

Kiitaa                   (User #7775) N/A 03/04/2010 05:49:15am

i loved it, it was epic !
i can not wait for you to publish again!
the whole brian on the phone thing, reminds me of my sick friends..
maybe thats why i was laughing uncontrollably throughout..
but please it was so good, i cant take much longer of not reading!!

Hanny Gates                   (User #8413) N/A 03/04/2010 01:13:10am

That was AMAZING!!!!!
And Brian called at the perfect time!!!!!!
I absolutely loved it!!!
And then all the guys had to talk about it.... It's so funny.......
And I like how they all shut up when Ana comes down....
Oh and Jess sniffing Zack..... That was hularious... :D
Please update SOON!!! =] :D

V. Nicole                   (User #8301) N/A 03/04/2010 12:09:49am

Brian's phone conversation-Priceless(:
awwh they are so cute together; it's gooey but
in a good way! Us readers got tortured
with the thought of these two characters
never getting the chance to say,
I Love You
and plus, the way they tell
each other is so natural!
So, gooey is a good thing. They are some
sex loving people, but who doesnt love sex(;
That was a lah-lah-lahvley story!
u p d a t e

:D

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