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Part #22 - Chapter 21: Just One Night
Hanny Gates                   (User #8413) N/A 08/08/2010 02:45:53am

That was interesting... It's good that Leana got out though....
Update Soon.... !! :D

Part #21 - Chapter 20: Almost
Built For Syn                   (User #8500) N/A 07/26/2010 07:24:12am

Oh...my...this is so intense! I don't get it at all, why was someone in Keely's room cleaning? And what does it have to do with the guy?
This is like a murder mystery without the murder!
I hope this all gets sorted out, I can't wait to see who did it!
Update soon!

Hanny Gates                   (User #8413) N/A 07/26/2010 05:55:27am

Poor Leana! And Jimmy!!! That sucks!!
And why wasn't Keely's room gone through... And just uberly clean...
That's kinda odd...
i hope they find who did this....
Please Update soon!!!
i can't wait to read what happens next!!!

Hanny Gates                   (User #8413) N/A 07/26/2010 05:55:26am

Poor Leana! And Jimmy!!! That sucks!!
And why wasn't Keely's room gone through... And just uberly clean...
That's kinda odd...
i hope they find who did this....
Please Update soon!!!
i can't wait to read what happens next!!!

Part #20 - Chapter 19: Breaking Down
SurviveThisWorld                   (User #8386) N/A 07/02/2010 03:32:02pm

'Bark.'
I love that. Zacky's so funny!

Built For Syn                   (User #8500) N/A 07/02/2010 08:55:39am

Fantastic chapter! I loved it!

This is so twisted that, wow, like, I mean, where is Brian?! And, Val and Leana were really worried about the whole Cameron thing?!

I think there's something about Cameron that nobody wants to tell Keely.

Lols at Zack. I can't believe he got stuck! Hahaha!

But, oh my god, I agree, did Brian trash everything?! :o

Update soon!!!!

itsvickyy                   (User #7605) N/A 07/02/2010 04:10:41am

Woahhh.
The beginning of this was so funny with the hangovers haha.
and Z is too cute haha.
They got robbed? whattt.
Can't wait to see what will happen now!

Hanny Gates                   (User #8413) N/A 07/01/2010 10:16:46pm

That was so funny!!!! I loved that morning!!!
Poor Johnny!! Lol...
And i loved the whole Jeweler comment!!
The whole hotel being thrashed was weird!!
It wasn't Bri, was it???
Anyways I loved this chapter!!
Please update ASAP!!!!
I must know what happens next!!!

Summer                   (User #8463) N/A 07/01/2010 09:12:40pm

Wow, that sounds like a very eventful morning. Hahaa.
I loved it!
The way they were all messing around!
And bless Zack getting stuck under the sofa. xD
I don't think he's fat, he's just cute & chubby!
The way Zack was silent about Keely and Cameron was so adorable. He'd be such a great brother. I want him. NOW. lol! xD
Anyways, I was so not expecting that ending just like Beckiee! It's so off track :O
It's confusing lol.
Why mess up everything else becides Keelys stuff?
Hmm...
I hope you can update this soon! I really love this story.
It's amazing! :) x

foREVerBeckiee                   (User #8830) N/A 07/01/2010 09:06:19pm

I LOVED the beginning (: with them all shouting arguing and playing. I was actually laughing aloud whilst reading it xD
The way Val worried about Keely was so cute (': but she does need to chill a bit.
And LOL at Val and Leana's reaction to Cameron and keely xD Bless em.
But Zack bless him. It's cute how he froze because they're so close.
I wish I was close to Zack D; But it'll never happen hahaa.
And finally I was sooo not expecting that ending :O!
Thing have been taken and trashed but not Keelys stuff? Its weird. :S

Anyways, I hope you get to update soon now your holidays have started (:
x

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