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burymestanding                   (User #7433) N/A 02/14/2010 02:10:09am

Umf. I love this story too much, almost. And I don't think it
was a filler, at all - chapters like this are important for
character development and plot development. And you wrote it
beautifully, but of course < 3

Update soon? :D

Sassy                   (User #8175) N/A 02/05/2010 07:54:32am

I'll never understand why people think a chapter that helps to establish
the characters is a filler. I like to know the background, it helps to make
them real. I love it anyway!

I agree with stump-o-matic-girl on the block front. Push through with one
or two different starts. Ideas usually come while writing so writing
anything, even if you change it completely often works really well.

Anyhoo, great update. Looking forward to more.

Sas x

Stump-o-matic-girl                   (User #7189) N/A 02/04/2010 05:11:59am

I love it!
I hate when I get stuck... Kinda in that perdicament myself with The Take
You're doing a kickass job though and it is such an awesome job. It is so
believable and that's why it rocks. It is such a sweet story and I'm so in
love with Patrick in this it's not even funny...
Can't wait for more and hope it all works out...
One thing I like to do when I'm stuck is just start writing anything and see
where it takes me and sometimes it ends up not only turning into
something cool on it's own but also clears my head from trying too hard
to figure up more plotline.
Good luck, can't wait for more

sarah                    (ANONYMOUS) N/A 02/04/2010 03:30:07am

just to let you know, i am SO in love with this story!
i really anticipate your updates!
i think that to get from point A to B, something big should happen with one of the other band members.
it'll also even things out because joe and andy have hardly been in this story at all!
i dunno.
anyways, keep on truckin'!

SoGoodInBlue                   (User #8390) N/A 02/03/2010 10:10:17pm

you know i adore this story right???
great update!!!
and love your portrayal of pete. haha.

heresyourverse                   (User #8400) N/A 02/03/2010 07:03:23pm

AMAZING! i love this story so much. it's the most believable out of any that i've read because you know so much about the band. i can actually see this happening. REALLY great job, keep them coming!

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