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Lady Numb                   (User #8253) N/A 04/23/2010 08:48:33am

yay!an update!!! and what an update....yes, yes, yes, finally they kissed!! and they're so cute....awww!
And finally Zack broke up with I said, nothing against the real one, but the fictional one was really bad....
oooh, I so can't wait to read the next chapter...update soon!!!!

Part #9 - Chapter 8
Hanny Gates                   (User #8413) N/A 04/23/2010 03:02:26am

Yay!!! Bree is getting Better!!!
And Zack kissed her!! Awwww!
And then he went home annd dumped Gena!!!
But she is such a bitch, ruining
his amp like that!
I loved this chapter!!
It was awesome!!
Update soon please!!!

Lady Numb                   (User #8253) N/A 03/06/2010 12:08:58am

Alright...I'm wondering why Zack doesn't break up with Gena already.... I mean, it's so obvious...he likes Bree, Bree likes him.....come on Zack, I know you can do it!
Becca is my heroine, I love the way she behaves with Matt!
update soon!!

Lady Numb                   (User #8253) N/A 02/25/2010 09:42:16pm

Aw, poor Bree, a car accident! and of course poor Lucky....he's so sweet!!!Well, actually pretty much everyone is weet here....Zacky above all....will he break up with Gena already? How can he put up with her (got nothing with the real girl, but this fictional, I really don't like her....)
waiting for an update!

Part #6 - Chapter 5
xAracnaex                   (User #8333) N/A 02/20/2010 07:25:34pm

so i probably shouldn't review considering i helped write this, but it def ahd to be done. i mean, this chapter was funny. poor zack lol. we gotta post more soon Pix. it's gotta be done :)

Part #5 - Chapter 4
Lady Numb                   (User #8253) N/A 02/08/2010 11:45:28am

good,, now I'm really curious.... first of all, I can't wait to see what the guys will do at the girls' place.... and Zack is so adorable.... and even though I have an idea, I can't wait to read what Brian thinks about Gena.... I'm faithfully waiting for the next chapter!

Lady Numb                   (User #8253) N/A 02/07/2010 11:00:46am

I don't know how, but I had missed chapter two...anyways, now I've read both two and three and they confirmed what I thought, I like this story... and I'm really curious to see what's happening next, now that the A7X guys have finally met the band...or better, now that Matt & Zack have met Pixie and Bree...

Lady Numb                   (User #8253) N/A 01/30/2010 03:12:28pm

I'm intrigued....I really wanna know what's gonna happen... can't wait to read a new chap!

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