This was great! I can't get over how natural and believable your dialogue is! It's a real talent - one that I wish I had! I'm so jealous! :D
I have to go to bed now but I'll read the next chapter tomorrow!
ohhh happiness!!! there together!!! like real BF-GF stuff!!!
okay...i think bree should get with andy. cause hes sweet and like the opoisitte of bree. they'd be cute. or mabye pete cause they get on eachothers nereves. or even joe. idk why joe just...he never gets a main!!!
PLEASE UPDATE SOOONNNN!!!!!!
MY HEAD WILL EXPLAIN! I'M SORRY IT JUST WILL!
i love your version of patrick too. he's just so much like the real thing.
I'm soooo glad Patrick refused to get back together with that girl. And I
think you write him so well - from his feelings about the money to his
behaviours. You've got him down pat :)
Update soon? I need more! < 3
Oh man, what a great update!
This was so awesome. You write Patrick so well, and it makes me smile.
I love it so much. You're doing such an awesome job, and they're so damn adorable together.
I'm so excited for them, but oh man... what's next?