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Part #31 - My Own Sins - Chapter 29
Dezzy                   (User #6892) N/A 08/08/2010 11:40:50pm

I think I told you this but I read the sequel first before this. Hehe, I know you must be thinking, "Gah! When is she gonna leave me alone?!" lol but I didn't wanna clog your inbox with "I think you're so great" messages. I think it's fair that I review this.

First *points down* I agree with Sarah. You are something else. You inspire me to be better! And not many do that!

I loved this so much. I love these guys and the nightmare/dream land scared the crap outta me. I await the sequel's update!


Part #30 - My Own Sins - Chapter 28
SurviveThisWorld                   (User #8386) N/A 04/20/2010 06:33:57am

'Or whatever you do down here.' I don't know why, but I just
LOVE that line.
*Silently screams* Oh, God, all the emotions I've been
feeling for the last few moments! I'd scream aloud, but
that'd wake everyone up for no particular reason, so I'll
just stick to silently screaming. ;)

Part #19 - My Own Sins - Chapter 17
SurviveThisWorld                   (User #8386) N/A 04/20/2010 06:16:28am

I have one thing to say: I FREAKING LOVE THIS STORY! OH MY
GOD! Only good stories give me this outburst of happy
emotions, when I just can't wait to read what's happening
All of your stories just make me so happy! All your stories
make me unable to sit still because I'm so happy!

Part #31 - My Own Sins - Chapter 29
Sarah                    (ANONYMOUS) N/A 03/01/2010 07:53:45am

i'm grinning! that was such a cool ending!
i remember that rainy day when i was totally bored, so i decided to browse through the f.o.b. index, and i found this story at the top.
i read the first chapter and was amazed at not only the idea for the story, but the awesome style of writing you have!
it's sad that the story's finished though...
i agree with myfalloutboyromance, a sequel would be INSANELY AWESOME!
and i'm also hoping for updates on 'A Little More Kill Him'
i just wanna thank you so much for writing this awesome story!
i totally loved it and will probably re-read it sometime!
anyway, keep up your awesome work, and i would not be surprised to see your name published on a book cover someday...
except, i only know you as Sassy, so... i wouldn't know if i had seen it...
but the point still stands!
keep on writing! :-)

Stump-o-matic-girl                   (User #7189) N/A 03/01/2010 01:02:41am

Oh my!
What a terrific story!
First of all, I want to thank YOU! This has been a blast to read...
I remember thinking when it first started "what a unique idea" but it's
only made it so much more exciting to read. I loved it, absolutely loved
it! This story was odd, sad, scary, and funny all together. It was very
refreshing and I think you have a great talent for writing! Thanks for the
awesome story you shared with us and I am looking forward to more
from you!

MYFALLOUTBOYROMANCE                   (User #8435) N/A 02/28/2010 07:12:26pm

wow that was a really amazing story.
i'm quite sad its over. :(
a sequel sounds good though... :D
really really really amaziing.
thank you soo much!
maybe you could finish '... a little more kill him'
that would be good too...
although it is up to you theyre your stories lol.
cant wait for another piece of awesomeness from you!
really well done with, not only this story, but all of them!

Part #30 - My Own Sins - Chapter 28
MYFALLOUTBOYROMANCE                   (User #8435) N/A 02/27/2010 07:09:59pm

haha Patrick is great... im glad he's awake.
im glad Marcus and Silas have sorted stuff out.
everythings happy yay! lol
really awesome!

Stump-o-matic-girl                   (User #7189) N/A 02/26/2010 05:23:55am

Oh... I got cut off.
Excellent emotion in this update. I felt such relief for those two. All this
waiting was worth it. Again, excellent!

Stump-o-matic-girl                   (User #7189) N/A 02/26/2010 05:18:01am

Best update EVER!
I'm so proud of those two... About time, indeed.
h, I'm so happy!!!

sarah                    (ANONYMOUS) N/A 02/26/2010 02:55:03am

that, was the most adorable, touching, lovely thing!
i have to agree with Patrick; about time!
aw, Marcus and Silas are SO cute!
oh, and Patrick's okay too!
everything's all happy and emotional!
update soon! :P

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