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mistress'of'stump238                   (User #7767) N/A 11/17/2009 08:14:21pm

im on my knees begging for an update!

okay plot line...i really don't know...sorry!
i dont think he should find out just yet mabye they
should get a bit farther into the relationship first?
and bree should end up with pete or andy. or both.
haha. jk.

great job!!!

m5989b9107c                   (User #8118) N/A 11/15/2009 11:20:35pm

okk i have a plot idea!!!

well. i think patrick should find out.. and be all betrayed nd cute.. then they
should make up in a sweet way and stuff. not sex lmao

lol yeah, so far its been awesome!! please continue :D

RiskLetter.                   (User #5872) N/A 11/04/2009 06:08:42am

This was amazing

burymestanding                   (User #7433) N/A 11/04/2009 04:16:14am

This is lovely, and I'm so glad it's back! I truly missed reading this.
Horray for PSPs! :)

And this was not at all a filler chapter, at least in my opinion. Filler
chapters grate on my nerves, and this did nothing of the sort < 3

As for plot help... Bleh, I am next to useless there. Sorry :( But I'm sure
you'll come up with a brilliant idea sooner rather than later. Sometimes
there's nothing you can do but relax and wait for the plot bunny to show
himself :P

Stump-o-matic-girl                   (User #7189) N/A 11/03/2009 10:10:12pm

Well, I totally love this story.
I obviously don't want Patrick to find out
the truth and be all mad and sad and all that...

I don't know, I hate when I get stuck working out a plot also... I'll message you if I think of anything.

Great story! :)

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