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Hellbell Shadows                   (User #7632) N/A 07/29/2011 08:52:09pm

Is just me or Brian were Jealous of Cookie Pie?
I loved the fact of guys mocking Zacky, I guess it helped a little for him to realize that he's getting feelings for Annie.
And well, I just can't wait to see what's coming next.


Liera                   (User #9529) N/A 12/28/2010 09:53:33pm

O no's. I hope this all turns out good lol. Zacky's scared =] how intriguing

Haylie Jaed                   (User #3426) N/A 04/10/2010 01:22:38am

So Zacky's the kinda guy who likes to mess around, huh? Interesting. I love that he's afraid of her, and not just seeing her as some sort of challenge. That shows that he actually cares - about this friends, at the very least - and it's going to make everything so much more interesting.

I can't wait to see where this goes.


Screaming Silence                   (User #5693) N/A 01/31/2010 05:32:59pm

I love the difference in your writing from person to person. It's such a clear change, and I love it.

Yet another fantastic story. I enjoyed it immensely.

Yay, on to the next one.


synsterr                   (User #7349) N/A 10/24/2009 09:49:47pm

Okay, didn't realize this was already posted when I reviewed
chapter one. Haha.

But this was so awesome.
I'm glad Zack's all confused about what to do..I like it when guys
get the feeling of themselves not toally being in charge and
whatnot. Hahaa. If that made any sense.
Like us girls shouldn't be the only ones thinking about every move
and lingering on everything. Hahaa.

Anyway, can't wait for chapter two!!! I think your story is my
favorite right now. =D

~Embrace The Madness... foREVer~                   (User #7321) N/A 10/24/2009 02:23:20am


that's all there is to say about that.

loved it!!!!!!!!!

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