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Part #12 - Epilogue
Lady Numb                   (User #8253) N/A 09/07/2010 11:24:47pm

I agree with you, this is much more realistic than many other stories... that's another reason I liked it...
I'm glad they somehow managed to get over the awkwardness and are like brothers again...I'm glad that Brian didn't start treating Zacky differently, which is not an easy thing, at all...I also liked the very last part.... even though I don't think they'll ever end up together, I liked that you left some space for a very little doubt....great epilogue, I really like it! xoxo

MitchLucker's FallenAngel                   (User #8573) N/A 09/03/2010 04:40:19pm

Aw, it's the end.
Well at least it was a great ending.

I'm also glad that Brian and Zacky didn't end up together.
This ending did fit better this way than if they were to be together.

CutieMcfoREVer                   (User #7197) N/A 09/03/2010 03:58:17pm

Aww. Even though they didn't get together in the end it was still perfect to read. XD

I bet that fan would have been giggling all night. haha

Get ending.
And I'm glad that Brian and Zacky didn't get together in the end. I think it wouldn't have fit right if they did.
And it's awesome that you base your stories as real as you can make them. That's one of the things that I love about reading your stories!
It makes me feel as if it could really happen. XD

Part #11 - Chapter Nine
MitchLucker's FallenAngel                   (User #8573) N/A 08/31/2010 08:00:01am

Poor Zack, He's so heart broken :(
Why BRIAN! WHY!

Defiantly re-write it. I wanna see what it was suppose to be. XP
But don't get me wrong, this version was amazing too! hehe
I just wanna see what you had in mind for the other one.

CutieMcfoREVer                   (User #7197) N/A 08/31/2010 06:41:43am

AWW!!!
We all need to give him BIG bear hugs! Lots of them!
That must really really suck
And be very awkward for him to.

I think you should re-write this in the future, cause I'd love to see how you originally planned it to turn out.

Lady Numb                   (User #8253) N/A 08/30/2010 02:55:54pm

oh, poor Zack...evenn though he probably knew something like this was gonna happen, it must hurt a lot...but I can't really blame Brian, I mean, I would probably have the same reaction at first...it's something big.... I'm very curious to read the end of this, my little twisted mind can't really make any good theory this time...xoxo!

Part #10 - Chapter Eight
MitchLucker's FallenAngel                   (User #8573) N/A 08/29/2010 03:17:43am

This SO did not go downhill from the first chapter!
It went up hill at a rapid pace! UP HILL!!!!

WOO! Matt and Jimmy are hopefully okay with it!
It seemed like it anyway...

WHAT! It's coming to end!?!?!
NOO! I love this.
Oh well, I guess you can only confess your love once. hehe

Lady Numb                   (User #8253) N/A 08/28/2010 02:40:18pm

Ok, so...I'm not into slash, not really, not because I'm homophobic or anything, I just don't like them that much...but I got really curious, since I know how well you write, so I decided to give it a chance....and I'm actually liking it... I feel sorry for Zack, it's awful to like someone and not being able to tell him...and it's even worse when you have to pay attention to everything you do or say.... and now he also has to deal with the fear of losing the one he loves....way too much, poor little thing....
Talking about this chapter....I love Johnny...keeping a neutral expression...I loved him for that XD
Jimmy iss Jimmy, I didn't expect anything different from him, and the same goes for Matt...I've always imagined him as the big brother, the one who deals with things very seriously, who gives speeches to the others about what's wrong and what's right, and so on...
Waiting for the next chapter then, xoxo!! =)

CutieMcfoREVer                   (User #7197) N/A 08/28/2010 10:14:19am

I loved Jimmy's reaction. XP
He's so funny!! XD
Yay! They are both cool with it! Or at least I think Matt is... And Jimmy didn't really say anything.
But I guess they're both okay with it.

ONLY ABOUT 2 CHAPTERS!!!
Aw man...
I personally have loved every chapter that you've posted, on both stories.
Not one chapter has gone by that I've said 'eh It could be better.'
You're like one of the best writers on this site!

Part #9 - Chapter Seven
MitchLucker's FallenAngel                   (User #8573) N/A 08/21/2010 09:48:36am

Johnny is actually wise... hehe
And it's so cool that Johnny is alright with Zacky liking Brian.
But I wonder if Johnny will still be cool with it after he finds out Zacky loves Brian, and it's not a crush...
hmm...

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