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Part #9 - Unholy Confessions
Liera                   (User #9529) N/A 02/11/2011 06:43:41am

Heeey, i just read this whole story.
Sorry i didn't comment the other chapters, I was too busy reading them cuz they were so good XD
This is a really good story & I think you should continue it if possible =)

synsterr                   (User #7349) N/A 09/19/2009 11:40:47pm

I'm sick too. Heads all congested. With a sore throat. You?

It wasn't your best chapter but it wasn't horrible. I'm glad you
updated though! =D

Part #8 - Creep
synsterr                   (User #7349) N/A 09/13/2009 02:20:07am

Oh yeah..and FIRST! Woohoo! =P

synsterr                   (User #7349) N/A 09/13/2009 02:19:49am

That was...weird!!!!!!
What a freak doctor! Why would he even try something like that in
such a crowded, open, busy place??

And you would think nurses would've ran in at the sound of
anything like that. Some freakin hospital! Hahah.

Update soon!
I like this story a lot! =)

Part #7 - Closer
synsterr                   (User #7349) N/A 09/12/2009 04:24:00pm

Aw that was cute. But so against the rules. Hahah.

I bet the doctors michelles dad or something. Hahah. Jk.

Cute update. =)

Haylie Jaed                   (User #3426) N/A 09/12/2009 10:16:34am

Sweet, an update. ;) I thought this was going to go all Twilight on us for a moment there, what with the heart-monitor and the boy-heartthrob and all that. But I'm glad it didn't, 'cause that would have sucked.

That doctor creeps me out. o.o Got a bad feeling.

moneclover                   (User #7752) N/A 09/12/2009 04:24:12am

Aww!! Too cute!!

Part #6 - Hospital
moneclover                   (User #7752) N/A 09/12/2009 04:21:02am

It BETTER not be Michelle! That would be TOO crazy.

Part #5 - Attacked
moneclover                   (User #7752) N/A 09/12/2009 04:11:47am

Holy crap... that bitch is crazy!

Part #4 - Used
moneclover                   (User #7752) N/A 09/12/2009 04:07:21am

Hahah... that totally freaked me out. I got totally invested in the story, and was all scared for her and then I actually got mad and I was sitting here thinking to myself, "WHO HIT HER?!?!" I change my plots... I think we all change our plots... what's a plot if it can't be changed? Yes, I know that made no sense... but I'm sure you get it. Or not. Either way, I liked this chapter.

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