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Sassy                   (User #8175) N/A 12/14/2009 12:45:05am

Cool!! A new great story to read!!! :D
I know it's not new really, but it's new to me!

Looking forward to reading the other chapters, but for now, I got to go to bed.

Sas x

XxXProblem//\ChildXxX                   (User #7806) N/A 08/25/2009 01:02:15am

This is ahmazing!
I love it, cannot wait to read more!
Update soon, pleeaaasseee! (:

...oh, and just a thought, I thought it would be a cool idea to add characters
to your story. Like, the Panic! people, their girlfriends, users that seriously
want to be their girlfriends...ok, so I love being in fics, can't blame me for
trying! :D

Stump-o-matic-girl                   (User #7189) N/A 08/24/2009 12:23:00pm

Hell yeah! This is awesome!
What an awesome story...
Funny stuff too. I'm having a blasty reading it already, can't wait for some updates!

Great start!

Someone                   (User #7656) N/A 08/24/2009 11:52:43am

Oh my :D I love this so far! Patrick is so adorable ^_^ Can't wait to see the next chapter :D Please update soon!!

burymestanding                   (User #7433) N/A 08/24/2009 06:37:33am

Ooh I like this. I think it's a neat idea, what with her lying to him and
basically screwing herself over for the future... This is going to be a
favorite of mine, I can already tell. I can't wait to read more! :)

(And I had that same problem with italics and spacing... If I save it in
Microsoft Word 2003 it seems to work now. Does that help you at all? I
know it's aggravating when it doesn't come out like you meant it to.)

stumplover89                   (User #6833) N/A 08/24/2009 05:52:01am

AAAAHHH
I love it already. This is interesting cause I always wanted to write a story like
this but never knew how I would keep it up so now I am excited to read this. So
I ask for one thing, please update soon. *grins sheepishly*

mistress'of'stump238                   (User #7767) N/A 08/24/2009 12:42:08am

totally love this one!!!
and BTW love the way you threw saturday in there...clever...
and i laughed my ass off but i dont think i was ment to
where you were ment to say "honda" civic you said "hinda" civic....
i know its not funny but it is!
loved it...
cant wait for an update.

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