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Part #9 - Chapter 8
LVengeance                   (User #8441) N/A 02/26/2010 04:35:25am

So I like the story about Brian and his sister...but the thing is I think there are
two different stories here...or am I wrong? Chapter 3 is missing and if it's the
same story, I think everything lies there.

Part #28 - Chapter 27
Briandy G.                   (User #7446) N/A 09/20/2009 05:06:24am

Great ending darlin! Throwing the necklace into the ocean added such
closure to it all.

~Embrace The Madness... foREVer~                   (User #7321) N/A 09/18/2009 10:21:08pm


it was perfect, and now i'm off to work on my story (as yet unposted) that is actually oddly similar to this one... sort of...


loved it! and i CAN'T WAIT to read your new one, whenever you post it!

I'mTheFuckingWildOne                   (User #7342) N/A 09/18/2009 12:42:17pm


*Stands up clapping*

The ending was so amazing!

CutieMcfoREVer                   (User #7197) N/A 09/18/2009 10:11:44am

AWW, that ending was so awesome!
I'm glad she's happy with Zacky now!

it was an amazing story!
loved every chapter!

Part #27 - Chapter 26
~Embrace The Madness... foREVer~                   (User #7321) N/A 09/18/2009 01:14:52am


i cannot wait to see what happens next!!

Another awesome chapter!

I'mTheFuckingWildOne                   (User #7342) N/A 09/17/2009 04:38:16pm

Zack jumped into his lap. “Take me!”
I laughed so hard, when I read that!

Update soon!

Briandy G.                   (User #7446) N/A 09/17/2009 03:05:22pm

Bella and Brian moved in together! Awwww I knew it wasn't over
between those two. And Zack had me scared for a second that he was
gonna dump her.

Can't wait to see what happens when Matt's back in the picture.

Part #26 - Chapter 25
Briandy G.                   (User #7446) N/A 09/17/2009 02:56:27pm

Yay for sleeping with Zack! He's so much better for her and wouldn't
break her heart like that!

Part #25 - Chapter 24
Briandy G.                   (User #7446) N/A 09/17/2009 02:48:11pm

Hahahaha. Zack is cut off!

Matt's a complete douche. But I love that it's not gonna stop her from
living her life!

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