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Part #9 - Chapter 8
LVengeance                   (User #8441) N/A 02/26/2010 04:35:25am

So I like the story about Brian and his sister...but the thing is I think there are
two different stories here...or am I wrong? Chapter 3 is missing and if it's the
same story, I think everything lies there.

Part #28 - Chapter 27
Briandy G.                   (User #7446) N/A 09/20/2009 05:06:24am

Great ending darlin! Throwing the necklace into the ocean added such
closure to it all.

~Embrace The Madness... foREVer~                   (User #7321) N/A 09/18/2009 10:21:08pm

LOVED THE ENDING!

it was perfect, and now i'm off to work on my story (as yet unposted) that is actually oddly similar to this one... sort of...

lmao!

loved it! and i CAN'T WAIT to read your new one, whenever you post it!

I'mTheFuckingWildOne                   (User #7342) N/A 09/18/2009 12:42:17pm

Awwwwww!

*Stands up clapping*

The ending was so amazing!

CutieMcfoREVer                   (User #7197) N/A 09/18/2009 10:11:44am

AWW, that ending was so awesome!
XD
I'm glad she's happy with Zacky now!

it was an amazing story!
XD
loved every chapter!

Part #27 - Chapter 26
~Embrace The Madness... foREVer~                   (User #7321) N/A 09/18/2009 01:14:52am

O.O

i cannot wait to see what happens next!!

Another awesome chapter!

I'mTheFuckingWildOne                   (User #7342) N/A 09/17/2009 04:38:16pm

Zack jumped into his lap. “Take me!”
I laughed so hard, when I read that!

Update soon!

Briandy G.                   (User #7446) N/A 09/17/2009 03:05:22pm

Bella and Brian moved in together! Awwww I knew it wasn't over
between those two. And Zack had me scared for a second that he was
gonna dump her.

Can't wait to see what happens when Matt's back in the picture.

Part #26 - Chapter 25
Briandy G.                   (User #7446) N/A 09/17/2009 02:56:27pm

Yay for sleeping with Zack! He's so much better for her and wouldn't
break her heart like that!

Part #25 - Chapter 24
Briandy G.                   (User #7446) N/A 09/17/2009 02:48:11pm

Hahahaha. Zack is cut off!

Matt's a complete douche. But I love that it's not gonna stop her from
living her life!

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