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Part #9 - Chapter 8- City In The Sky.
Liera                   (User #9529) N/A 07/06/2011 05:49:04pm

Hehehe, this was awesome :)
O wow, they made it up there o.o
So i see you haven't updated this in like forever.
I really think you should :)
before some become angry & upset with you :O

Part #8 - Chapter 7- Roles Reversed.
Liera                   (User #9529) N/A 07/06/2011 05:40:07pm

even though none of this is planned out, i still love it ^_^
They're always bickering at each other XD
Guess that's what you get for being on opposite side :)

Part #7 - Chapter 6- Looses It's Thrill.
Liera                   (User #9529) N/A 07/06/2011 03:58:05am

lol i love how you're just free writing this.
That's how i write EVERYTHING of mine.
I just set a pen to paper & my mind goes to work.
The ideas will come to you as you go along :)
at least, they do for me.
Anyways, hopefully Matt CAN be trusted.
It's crazy that more & more are joining haha

Part #6 - Chapter 5- Don't Look Into The Light.
Liera                   (User #9529) N/A 07/06/2011 03:37:58am

It has to be Lucifer!!
sorry, i just had a bad feeling from that voice, so i had to blame that dude.
Anyways, i just love how she can control Brian.
I wonder if she'll actually get powerful enough to control Zack one day?
Haha, this must suck for Syn XD
He has to listen to a girl XD

Part #5 - Chapter 4- Silence Is Golden, Duct Tape Is Silver.
Liera                   (User #9529) N/A 07/06/2011 03:27:56am

Laughing my effing ass off over here!!!
That's just golden.
I LOVE it =D

Part #4 - Chapter 3
Liera                   (User #9529) N/A 07/06/2011 02:56:32am

she's like me, has a fear of heights & hates ppl's snitty attitudes lol
Awesome that they got clothes to fit in :)
Brian is such a smart ass.

Part #3 - What To Do?
Liera                   (User #9529) N/A 07/06/2011 02:21:14am

maybe she's the key to something very powerful on earth & the devil wants to use her?
I dunno lol
and yay!
they're both going to help her ^_^

Part #2 - New To This...
Liera                   (User #9529) N/A 07/06/2011 01:32:19am

Lol this is um, very interesting.
I love how they're both just bickering at each other.
It's stalling Syn from killing her XD
Go Zack XD
I like this :)

Part #9 - Chapter 8- City In The Sky.
deadraven                   (User #7481) N/A 06/19/2011 09:45:26pm

Oooooooh what's gonna happen? Will they notice who syn and Matt really are? Will they get the answers they're looking for?

I love the conversation that goes on between everyone in this its fantastic.

Udate soon

Part #8 - Chapter 7- Roles Reversed.
deadraven                   (User #7481) N/A 06/19/2011 09:40:15pm

I loved Matt's reaction to Syn and Zack's arguing and how Jordyn was just so used to it. you did a really good job and now I'm going to read more

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