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Part #3 - Let Me Ask, Would You Like That?
D.S.Coelho                   (User #7795) N/A 08/16/2009 02:49:21am

I like it as well. Update soon.
Please, please can I have Mr. GAtes? puw-ease?

Lol:D

*Phantom*                   (User #7607) N/A 07/09/2009 10:14:44pm

Haha, this is awesome, I really like it (:

I claim Zacky ^_^

please keep writing this, it's really good (: x

A.Vengeance                   (User #7423) N/A 07/09/2009 06:11:53pm

Well I liked it, good story line :3
and if it's possible can I have zack :') lul
So yeah update soon :D

Part #3 - Let Me Ask, Would You Like That?
I'mTheFuckingWildOne                   (User #7342) N/A 07/09/2009 11:23:29am

More more more more!
PLEASE!!!!! Tehe
Update sooon!

Part #2 - Say What?
Haylie Jaed                   (User #3426) N/A 07/08/2009 10:43:55pm

Well, I'm glad that you decided to join in all the fun. On the technical side of things, your writing is great. I didn't see any spelling errors, grammar and punctuation were good, YAY!! Somebody who can write dialogue!! And yeah. It's all good. =)

To the story - I'm really liking this so far. It sounds like it's going to be really interesting. The back-story was great, because now I really feel like I know this girl - I know how she feels about certain members of her family, and I can get a slight feel for what sort of a person she is.

I'll be watching for an update. ;)

I'mTheFuckingWildOne                   (User #7342) N/A 07/08/2009 05:10:51pm

I can't wait for more update sooon!

I'mTheFuckingWildOne                   (User #7342) N/A 07/08/2009 05:10:51pm

I can't wait for more update sooon!

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