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Part #16 - When There Is A Ending, There Is A Beginning
Briandy G.                   (User #7446) N/A 08/05/2009 12:51:25am

Good story dear! Liked it!

CutieMcfoREVer                   (User #7197) N/A 08/04/2009 09:20:02am

hell yer there should be a sequal!!
XD
sounds good to me!

loved the story!
it was a good ending too.

Siren_Shadows                   (User #7495) N/A 08/03/2009 10:13:18pm

Sequal? Sure. LOL

It was good, more or less a great story.

Megan Vee                   (User #7641) N/A 08/03/2009 02:02:52pm

First.

WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL ME YOU UPDATED THIS!?
Maybe you did and I forgot to read it...

Anywho, a sequel?! Definitely.
I liked this, but the ending was too abrupt!!! GAH!
YOU ARE EVIL!
But not really, ILY.

*starts chanting sequel over and over again*

Part #15 - Revenge Is Sweet
CutieMcfoREVer                   (User #7197) N/A 08/03/2009 06:18:40am

yer, should have shot him in the balls.
would have been funny and gotten sweet revenge, haha
but that ending was cool.

Siren_Shadows                   (User #7495) N/A 08/02/2009 09:58:22pm

Shoulda shot him in the balls.

...

Juat sayin. Then one in the stomach.


POOR MATTY!... That is all.
Update!!!

Megan Vee                   (User #7641) N/A 08/02/2009 05:59:50pm

That was really intense. It had my little heart racing.
At least you know that Matt loves you :)
And you love him too.

Gosh. I hope that fuckhead [Ken] is dead.
No one deserves to go through torture like that.

UPDATE SOON!

Megan Vee                   (User #7641) N/A 08/02/2009 05:58:39pm

FIRST :)

Part #14 - I Should Have Listened
CutieMcfoREVer                   (User #7197) N/A 08/02/2009 06:56:43am

hmm...
whats in the box...
haha that just made me think of Jimmy singing
'oh shit, whats in the bucket'
haha, i dunno why?!?!
but anyway, was a good chapter!
even though it was a cliffhanger
XD

Briandy G.                   (User #7446) N/A 08/02/2009 02:16:12am

I'm with Irene! YAY BUMBLEBEE!!!!!!

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