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Part #12 - Chapter Nine : "Visitors In The Night"
Sumi                    (ANONYMOUS) N/A 01/27/2011 02:05:19am

Only DeAmi is able to praise and insult one person in the same announcement...

Btw, the last time I checked, there were four and a half of us... What's happening here?! *taking no responsibility...*

Part #6 - Chapter Four : "Hayada No Ie" (Hayada's House)
Sumi                    (ANONYMOUS) N/A 12/29/2010 06:13:39pm

Oh my gosh!! Thanks for the reviews ^-^ I feel so proud for DeAmi ^o^ I'm gonna work hard to get those chapters edited faster!!

Kurokawa Tadayoshi                   (User #7974) N/A 06/08/2010 09:13:40am

Ah, what a refreshing chapter for this emotionally gripping story! What it is to feel the gritty angst of teen emotion! Love, jealousy, bitterness, joy, anger - all very accurately conveyed by the ever-entertaining cast of this drama. My personal favorite aspect of any good story is character depth, and this one has no problem creating just that! All I can do is wait with bated breath for the trampoline of chapter five to bounce me back up from this cliffhanger!

Part #5 - Chapter Three: "Misui" - Part 2/2
Kurokawa Tadayoshi                   (User #7974) N/A 03/01/2010 04:01:12pm

*This counts for part one too :D*
As always, I am intrigued by the position the characters are in when I begin to read these incredible chapters. As usual, I can completely understand how the characters (especially Misui) are developing as their emotions are greatly demonstrated through DeAmi's unique and mesmerizing wordplay. I feel closer to Misui as her story is begun to be told, and the hardships she experiences make me root for her even more when those faint glimmers of light in her life distract her from the darkness. Please, keep it up!

Part #2 - Chapter One : "Seiko Ni Hana" (Flowers To Seiko)
Sa-chan                    (ANONYMOUS) N/A 11/28/2009 07:39:40pm

So cool Senpai! I know I haven't read too many of your stories in couple of years but this is really amazing, you've come a long way since the last story.(I'm not saying your past ones weren't good, they were great!) Keep up the good work Senpai!

Part #3 - Chapter Two : "Ame" (Rain)
Tadayoshi                    (ANONYMOUS) N/A 10/01/2009 03:23:45am

More story to sate my hunger. This time, it is a chapter of converging times, revealing some past and blending it with the present and future, all the while providing generous insight into Youhei's mind. Introducing new characters grants a family-like atmosphere in this chapter, showing the more light-hearted side life can show. As usual, a perfect mixture of dramatic, comedic, and tragic elements give this story an even more original touch. I eagerly await the next chapter.

Part #2 - Chapter One : "Seiko Ni Hana" (Flowers To Seiko)
Tadayoshi                    (ANONYMOUS) N/A 10/01/2009 03:12:28am

I am always hungry. Hungry for good reads. With this chapter, I am satisfied, but I crave more. Intense mood detail, conflicted and actually deep characters that leave a nice amount of mystery, and vivid detail are only some of the engrossing aspects that give this story a brilliant start. As I read, I was drawn to the next scene, almost as if it were a magnificently directed film or a stunning anime masterpiece. The chemistry between Youhei, Misui, and his progressive emotions give this anecdote a genuine feel with a seamless flow. Five stars!

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