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BornInHeels                   (User #5334) N/A 07/29/2009 08:22:46am

i am sorry for just finding this...(I guess I suck at life)
Very much liked this!

so get to writing another story... :P

WorldOnStringer                   (User #6720) N/A 06/25/2009 02:11:49pm

I liked it! I understand about the site problems...
it's messed up my formatting bazzillions of times. *sigh*
It was a little hard to read because of that, but otherwise--
I loved the repetition of phrases to emphasize a point,
and I loved how the cologne stayed so close to the plot all the way to the end.
Good job! =)

FloodedxLungs                   (User #6142) N/A 06/25/2009 05:43:37am

that was a really amazing story. =]
one thing i would suggest would be to not clump it all together, but separate it into paragraphs.
that would make it a lot easier to read and make the dialogue more discernable.
but all in all, that was an awesome story.

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