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Part #9 - Chapter 8
deathbat6661                   (User #6803) N/A 10/12/2009 08:57:20am

i agree that was pretty hot!
so now you have to update!!!!!!!!!
hint [update]
lol i love this fic so update omfg like now lol
woot can't wait!!! XD :p

Briandy G.                   (User #7446) N/A 09/24/2009 12:28:52am

*picks jaw up off floor*

Holy. Shit. That. Was. Hot.

synsterr                   (User #7349) N/A 09/22/2009 05:43:04pm

Hahahaha... @ beka..

Worth the wait, yep! That was pretty hot, but I have a feeling he's
just saying all that..with no meaning behind it whatsoever. Idk..

Update soon!

~Embrace The Madness... foREVer~                   (User #7321) N/A 09/22/2009 05:58:04am

It was well worth the wait!

Thank you dear... It was amazing!

Also, thanks for all your reviews on my story... *winks* they're appreciated!

I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!!!!!! What else can I say? oh god... I think I need to go... ahem... now.

Part #8 - Chapter 7
synsterr                   (User #7349) N/A 08/16/2009 08:23:01am

Wow!! That was soooo funny!!!
I love the "yes ma'am" scene. I can totally imagine every single
thing you wrote.

Great chapter.
Update soon!
Total cliffhanger. Haha

Briandy G.                   (User #7446) N/A 08/15/2009 06:40:10am

Read this last night! Love it!

Update soon dear!

~Embrace The Madness... foREVer~                   (User #7321) N/A 08/14/2009 04:19:14am

that was fun!!!

Part #7 - Chapter 6
Megan Vee                   (User #7641) N/A 08/03/2009 05:24:43pm

I like this story, I really do.
BUT-yes there is a 'but.'
Whenever someone starts talking, you have to start a whole new line and
not keep it all jumbled up into one paragraph.
Even though you do a great job of pointing out who said what, it still gets a
little hard to read.
Your detail, though, and the exactness of what's going on is perfect. It's not
too much and it's not too vague.
Just take what I said into consideration.

*And I agree with synsterr... curse the cliffhanger.
:)

synsterr                   (User #7349) N/A 08/01/2009 06:34:47pm

Ahhhhh! That was awesome!!!

Cliffhanger!!!
You MUST update soon!!

~Embrace The Madness... foREVer~                   (User #7321) N/A 08/01/2009 04:27:20am

Thank the gods for Avenged Sevenfold...

Otherwise I'd be bored out of my mind right now...

I've read worse, dear... And this story just keeps getting more interesting.

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