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Screaming Silence                   (User #5693) N/A 04/24/2009 08:16:01pm

Frankie.... has.... been.... eaten!
ZOMG!!! Awesome chapter though! (Sorry Frankie!)
It was disturbing and interesting all at the same time!
Bravo!

shadzlove                   (User #5955) N/A 04/19/2009 09:57:41pm

Twisted, twisted, twisted. Agh, I don't know what else to write, it was just really
good and *looks down at other reviews* my words have already been taking
out of my mouth!

Can't wait for the next chapter (as always)

CurrentlyInactive                   (User #6714) N/A 04/19/2009 04:29:42am

Wow, I take that back.
I'm glad I wasn't in the story.. although I agree with Frankie. Reading about your own death would be awesome.
I'd love to die =)
OMG Frankie should totally become a zombie.. before Haylie dies.. Haylie! Quick! What do you want on your tombstone?
Anyyyywayyz before I go off on my zombie eating rants.. This was a great chapter..
and not a fail in anyway..
My brother walked in the room
Brother: "What are you doing?"
Me: "Get the hell out of the room. Zombie Zacky is eating Frankie.. and some hobos."
My brother.. "I won't ask anymore"

He seemed creeped out =) Good Job.

Can't wait for more

Frankie Cooper                   (User #6517) N/A 04/18/2009 07:53:25am

That was no fail!

That was so cool,twisted but cool. How many people get to read about their own death? Well I found it intresting to say the least. You can kill me anytime as long as it's in fiction of course.You killed me horror movie style which was awesome.

"She's kicking and screaming and I'm tempted to tear her spine out." Haha! Thats the nicest thing anyone has ever said to me *twitch*

"I need to find those two hobos." Great line!

He's gonna eat Haylie!! Can Zombie Frankie kick Zombie Zacky's ass? Lol.

Haylie Jaed                   (User #3426) N/A 04/17/2009 11:09:41pm

T_T Fraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaankie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reading about that, knowing that it was my bestie, made me want to cry. =( My girl. My sister. T_T And they're gonna eat her!!

...well...ate her. Yick.

Awesome chapter, though. Not a fail at all. =)

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