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Part #36 - Chapter Thirty-Five
Lady Numb                   (User #8253) N/A 09/07/2010 11:14:55pm

I can't believe it's over...but I actually liked the ending... it leaves me with hope that everything will be fine... and Haylie sounds much more relaxed at the end, she's confident everything will be okay in the end...
I fyou want to write a sequel, I'm all for it.... I'm already creating new theories about what could happen...
Well....it's sad...it's over....but at the same time, since I loved this story so much I'm glad to finally see it finished... I guess all the beautiful things must come to an end :(...well, at least there's still Second Chance!!=) xoxo

Hanny Gates                   (User #8413) N/A 09/02/2010 05:11:52pm

I wanna cry now!!! I can't believe this is over!!
PLEASE write the sequel... Well eventually...
You don't have to immediately... That would be nice,
but it's your choice... But it kinda sucks that she wasted most of her time with Lance, and fighting with
Bri and Zacky.... At least she'll get to return though.. :)
And the part where Lance was being a complete
asshole made me want to sock him in the face! Lol
By the way, name is Hannah.. :)
Lol... But just PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write a
sequel!!! There MUST be one! THis was such an
AMAZING story and is deserves a sequel!!! :)

allybaby                   (User #8922) N/A 09/02/2010 12:48:46pm

it wasn't a crappy ending!
it was sad actually. ):
poor girl is being shipped off
to her father who didn't give a shit
about her in the first place.
but i do hope you do write a sequel
because i loved this story.
but i guess only time will tell!
oh and my real name is Alicia.
but you can call me Ali. haha. xD

MitchLucker's FallenAngel                   (User #8573) N/A 09/02/2010 09:56:12am

Oh no! THE END!!!
I hate endings... but maybe a sequal in the near future... yes?

Sigh...
Anyway, I must say that it's been one of the most enjoyable stories I've ever read.
You're really a great writer! XP

CutieMcfoREVer                   (User #7197) N/A 09/02/2010 09:47:06am

AWW! It's the end...
But hopefully there is a sequal.
It doesn't have to be right away, but hopefully in the future sometime. XD

Oh and by the way my name is Kerry, XD
Just thought I'd tell you. haha

Part #35 - Chapter Thirty-Four
MitchLucker's FallenAngel                   (User #8573) N/A 08/31/2010 07:55:09am

I KNEW LANCE WAS EVIL!! EVIL!!
*clears throat*

Okay,
WHOA! They found her dad
That can't be good...
But things were looking so good for her!

CutieMcfoREVer                   (User #7197) N/A 08/31/2010 04:02:48am

Oh no!
I totally flipped when I read the ending of this!
They found her dad! Wow...

I STILL HATE LANCE!!! We should take that baseball bat that Zacky found on the park and hit Lance with it!!
I'd be all for it! XD

Oh you SO have to do a sequal!
I will be forever happy! hehe

Lady Numb                   (User #8253) N/A 08/30/2010 02:46:43pm

you know why I loved this chapter?because all the reasons that brought me to deeply hate Lance are back!!XD hey, ok, he might be right on the fact that Zacky and Brian didn't behave well with Haylie, but he saw how hurt she was, he should be happy for her...and she always told him her true feelings about Zack....oh, I'm so happy she's not gonna talk to him ever again...(she won't, right?)
They found her father? worst timing ever...I so know I'm gonna pay to use the internet connection in Greece, I can't wait a whole week to read what's gonna happen now....XD
Loved, loved this chapter...and Jimmy is very forgiven for being stupid with Zacky...what he did to Michelle is enough to make me adore him!XD
xoxo!

allybaby                   (User #8922) N/A 08/30/2010 01:05:49pm

ahhh shit.
you gotta be kidding me.
that poor girl.

i really do hope you do a sequel.
if not thats okay to.
i love this story.
and i loved the update.

put the last chapter up when you can !

Part #34 - Chapter Thirty-Three
MitchLucker's FallenAngel                   (User #8573) N/A 08/29/2010 03:13:48am

WOO!! Brian is okay with it!
AWESOME!!! XD

AND THEY KISSED! ...and talked...
BUT THEY KISSED!!!
Hell yeah!

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