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wheyz q.                   (User #1579) N/A 10/08/2005 07:44:58pm

Well, it was an OK fic.
One thing that--really--irritates me is author's notes in the fiction. While I'm reading, I don't need to know what you're thinking.
But those and your poor spelling aside, it was pretty good. :-)

seinah marie                   (User #1282) N/A 10/02/2005 01:05:51pm

really great story. I like it ^_^ but please don't take this two offencly but. you kinda need to work on spelling, but i'm the one to talk my spelling suxs, oh and maybe you could put Vincent in, once again great story

Lauren shelton                    (ANONYMOUS) N/A 03/13/2005 05:24:32pm

your story was really well but u should put alot of action between talkng parts also some more detail in some paragraphs. but besides that it was pretty good. Keep up the good work!

Lauren shelton                    (ANONYMOUS) N/A 03/13/2005 05:22:47pm

your story was pretty well. But put alot more detail in some parts. like when Airis came alive from the materia. also put alot of action between talking parts and that would make it definitly a awsome story!

Lauren shelton                    (ANONYMOUS) N/A 03/13/2005 05:19:37pm

Very good story and all but put alot of action into it. make parts like.... sephiroth attacking kadaj in underworld or somthin! (lol) But it was a really good story and i liked it.Also put alot more detail then you already have.

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