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shadzlove                   (User #5955) N/A 01/28/2009 12:46:58pm

WHOAH! you managed to confuse me, girl! haha
I was so worried when no one remembered her; I was gonna cry if that turned
out to be reality.
And thanks for leaving quite the cliffhanger... now my waiting for the next
update will be more anxious lol

143shadowluv                   (User #6617) N/A 01/27/2009 05:48:08pm

holy crap! i just got soooo confused. it made me soo sad when johnny said i dont know a val. i saoooooo cant wait for more:)

Reesa Mercy                   (User #6584) N/A 01/27/2009 04:08:37pm

omg. what's going on?! poor val. i cried when Johnny didn't know who she was.
i agree with aayame, it definitely took a few rereads to totally understand it. but that's what makes it great.
amazing chapter. can't wait for more soon!!!!

Reesa Mercy

CurrentlyInactive                   (User #6714) N/A 01/27/2009 03:44:16pm

Wow! That took me a little bit, and a few re-readings to understand it. It was really good! I almost died when she called Johnny.. and he didn't know who she was. What's going on with Val?

Can't wait for the next update.

*first* finally.. heh

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