Mascot "Kumi" © 2005 Chastain & Fan Works Inc. All Rights Reserved. Mascot "Kumi" © 2005 Chastain & Fan Works Inc. All Rights Reserved.
 
Memorial - In Loving Memory of Chester Gregorich, 1981-2005
Home | Directory | Help & Tools | Just In! | [Search]
[Log In | Join]

Musicians/Music Groups Fan Fiction >> Avenged Sevenfold >> This Hell Is Our Home: Squall (A Sequal) >> Reviews


Reviews Per Page

Reviewer E-Mail Date
Frankie Cooper                   (User #6517) N/A 01/26/2009 02:59:58am

That was a great way to connect the two, very smart connection. I really liked it hun. XO

p.s I Agree, you're super talented and Haylie rambles on too much. 0=)

Screaming Silence                   (User #5693) N/A 01/25/2009 07:15:40pm

*Is seeing a theme* Haylie just rocks where reviews are concerned! =)
...
10 minutes later...

Ok, I agree, the first one was just completely awesome! But this one was good too!! I never thought I'd enjoy war fic's but you have a knack for it!

You're awesome! Can't wait for more of your story's!
=)

CurrentlyInactive                   (User #6714) N/A 01/25/2009 06:25:04pm

Have to agree with Shadz. After Haylie it takes me like 4 minutes sitting here to think of a decent review that is somewhat different from hers.

Poor Jimmy and his sons. It was in the form of a letter which was different. I love how even though Jimmy came home from the war he still was afraid when the soldiers came with his sons' tags. It was great and I love it.
Really good job =)

shadzlove                   (User #5955) N/A 01/25/2009 05:34:48pm

Ugh see, as soon as Haylie gives her deep, insightful review, there's nothing I
can write that can possibly follow it!

So here comes my lame review that fails in comparison to Haylie's:
This was still good. It had intensity just like the first, but the fact that it was in
a letter toned it down a bit. That doesn't mean it's worse than first, it's just a
different way of describing a similar experience.
I really liked it!
Great job [:

Haylie Jaed                   (User #3426) N/A 01/25/2009 05:11:14pm

I ramble too much and say all I can think to say - that's why everybody always agrees with me. XD

So I agree this wasn't as good as the first, but I still think it was amazing. It stuck with the themes and the mood of the first one, and was quite a worthy sequel. I like how Jimmy killed himself in the end, the same way that his friend did all those years ago. And I like how, despite the fact that he was in a war of his own and couldn't possibly be scared as easily as any other man, he was still terrified and throwing up when he got the letter about Mikey. And then the change of heart with Gerard...

Wow.

Great stuff. ;D

*ramble over*

143shadowluv                   (User #6617) N/A 01/25/2009 04:24:12pm

wow.. that is impressive!! as always. you are super talented hun!

Submit A Review
Annonymous Reviews require a VALID e-mail address, or the review will not show up.
Name: E-Mail:


[Return to Top]
TOS  |  Privacy Policy  |  Questions/Comments?  |  Found a bug?  |  Report violations of the TOS
Powered by E-FanWorks v3.9.9b © Null Referrence Software 2003-2006