Musicians/Music Groups Fan Fiction >> Panic! At The Disco >> Concert equals a happy ending >> Reviews
okay, its a good start. I dont mean to be harsh, but it went way to fast, you need more detail. That, with a fair amount of detail, could be turned into a chaptered story. So, for your next piece,just remember, more detail.
But, i liked it.
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