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Part #6 - Constants Aren't So Constant Anymore
Kristal Comeau                   (User #2856) N/A 02/10/2009 01:57:54pm

Aiden or Jake?
this is going to be interesting
and what about izzy!?
i haven't decided whether to hate or like her
but it's A GREAT STORY!



doyleangel                   (User #5808) N/A 02/09/2009 12:06:50pm

I can't tell if I'm supposed to like Izzy or not.
And now I don't know if I want Desi to be with
Jake or Aiden...darn confusing stories!!

Update soon :-)

MadAsRabbits                    (ANONYMOUS) N/A 02/08/2009 11:06:23am

Aw That was a good chapter!!! I'm glad that Desi & Jake are like friends...maybe more??? I feel bad for you & your dinosaur computer, that sucks!! I used to have one and i almost killed myself until i got a new one! Aiden is being a jerk, well kinda not in this chapter but in the other ones he was. Sorry if this reveiw just keeps going on and on and on, i just had a red bull and now im REALLY hyper!!!!!!!!!! So i was happy when i saw you updated!!
Update soon please!

Part #5 - Stay Sleeping With My Screaming In Your Itching Ears
Kristal Comeau                   (User #2856) N/A 02/02/2009 03:02:56pm

i loved it!
exciting and the thing about her "little voice" makes sense :)
and poor desi likes Aiden, i wanted to hug her :)


doyleangel                   (User #5808) N/A 01/29/2009 10:55:33am

aw much love. This is a good story. hopefully aiden realizes that he likes Desi.....update when you about your computer

MadAsRabbits                    (ANONYMOUS) N/A 01/28/2009 07:59:06pm

That was a very good chapter! And the thing about um her sunconsious thing or something...
makes sense
Aw poor Desi, i think her and jake should go out
Update soon please

Part #4 - Hell Or Glory, I Don't Want Anything In Between
MadAsRabbits                   (User #6416) N/A 01/22/2009 08:26:25pm

This is a good story!! aw poor Desi
Hey one of my best friends name is Jake and he is like goth and crap Odd
k well update soon please!!

doyleangel                   (User #5808) N/A 01/19/2009 11:26:22am

oh that sucks that Aiden's got a what's gonna happen!?

WorldOnStringer                   (User #6720) N/A 01/18/2009 11:40:59pm

Aw this story is awesome!!
I'm a reader from this point on!

Part #3 - I'm In The Business Of Misery
Kristal Comeau                   (User #2856) N/A 01/13/2009 07:07:44pm

ummmm can we all say AWSOME!
ahhhh!!! i can't wait for an update!
so u should def. update sooon!!! PLZ!!1

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