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Part #9 - Chapter 07
Fauxaffliction19                   (User #7054) N/A 02/20/2009 08:34:48pm

those last four sentences! amazinggggg!

Part #11 - Chapter 09
Fauxaffliction19                   (User #7054) N/A 02/20/2009 08:30:46pm

the ending is lovely and simple
great job!

Part #9 - Chapter 07
Fauxaffliction19                   (User #7054) N/A 02/20/2009 08:03:58pm

those last four sentences! amazinggggg!

Part #4 - Chapter 03
Fauxaffliction19                   (User #7054) N/A 02/20/2009 07:29:20pm

back onto Chuck, this is now reminding me of 'Lullaby'
keeps getting better

Part #3 - Chapter 02
Fauxaffliction19                   (User #7054) N/A 02/20/2009 07:13:23pm

ah there you go, you have read invisible monsters!

your writing is so good!

Part #2 - Chapter 01
Fauxaffliction19                   (User #7054) N/A 02/20/2009 07:12:13pm

your writing reminds me of chuck palahniuk, (means your writing is amazing) which 'time to dance' is inspired by one of his books 'invisible monsters'

it's fantastic

Part #12 - Author's Note
marmar                   (User #6162) N/A 12/25/2008 07:22:13pm

yes you should definitely write a sequal=]

prettyodd151                   (User #6083) N/A 12/10/2008 07:07:13pm

yes!
you should definitely write a sequel.
but hm, i dont really have any ideas in particular at the moment...

Part #11 - Chapter 09
Marci Darci                   (User #6415) N/A 12/08/2008 09:35:52pm

WOW.

> but you and Brendon, both, know that something sparked alive in him that night. And something died in you. >

that line made me so sad!
don't get me wrong, I LOVED IT!
but a sequel would be fabulous so if i magically get creative i will let you know =)

marmar                   (User #6162) N/A 12/08/2008 09:20:17pm

this was so good
although i do kind of wish the ending was more exciting
but i'm not complaining because it was still awesome
i loved this story=]

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