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Part #6 - Wake Up, You're Alive
carovl                   (User #3577) N/A 01/08/2009 11:20:20pm

this chapter's just like the last one?

I think you got mess up uploading this...

Haha anyways...



Part #5 - You Can't Afford Me
carovl                   (User #3577) N/A 01/08/2009 11:18:47pm

oh god. PAIN!!!

I thought I had read this...

OHHH I'm so Off to

Well written, I liked this chapter a lot!


Part #4 - When You And I Are Alone, I've Never Felt So At Home
carovl                   (User #3577) N/A 12/01/2008 09:54:34am


I kinda need more!!!!!


This is goooooooooooooood but honestly, I need more!


Part #3 - Dare You To Move
carovl                   (User #3577) N/A 11/06/2008 09:41:53am

DUDE!!! I'm waiting for an update!!! LOL It's almost a month without reading this story!

Put up some more, please!


carovl                   (User #3577) N/A 10/18/2008 10:53:13pm

Yea!! Make him talk to Sebby!!!!

Geeze, this boy can't die!!!!!!

Update sooooooon!!


LaceySkye                   (User #6384) N/A 10/15/2008 07:22:22pm

make seb talk to him NOW!
if ben can talk to patrick, he can surely talk to his REAL brother

but nice chappy.
i wanna hear more, but not so depressing!

Part #2 - Control
LaceySkye                   (User #6384) N/A 10/07/2008 05:07:34pm

that was REALLLY good. i love how you write!!!!! kinda depressing toooo. make
ben happy! and tell seb to love him more!! haha

carovl                   (User #3577) N/A 10/05/2008 02:14:44pm

Hahahah Pierre's CRAZY-a! That's why I love him-a! Dude this was a funny chapter to read...

Except for the final part...Hummm Seb and Ben NEED to talk, and... We love you Ben!! Why can't you see that? We're your family and we are there for you!!!

Great chappy, too short but still good...

Put up some more!!!


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