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Part #17 - Chapter 16: Shopping
Abby Lynn                   (User #6318) N/A 12/15/2008 03:17:21pm

loved this chapter! please continue with writeing

Part #12 - Chapter 11: Confusion
Abby Lynn                   (User #6318) N/A 10/20/2008 03:18:36pm

great story loving every seccond i am reading it! Keep it up!

Part #14 - Chapter 13: Thanks Superman...
Abby Lynn                   (User #6318) N/A 09/24/2008 05:47:09pm

This is a GREAT story i love it! keep up the great work and post more soon! LOVE la!

Larissa                    (ANONYMOUS) N/A 09/13/2008 09:51:14pm

This is really good!!!! post more soon!!!

Part #8 - Chapter 07: Backstage
LPjabbalove                   (User #5626) N/A 08/15/2008 07:10:38pm

i loved it but
it was a bit dialogue heavy. try to show, not tell. maybe in the end have joe act upon Carsen being his love interest and that it clicks in Cana's head.
keep working at it because i love this story!!!

Part #7 - Chapter 06: Pantene Or Herbal Essences?
LPjabbalove                   (User #5626) N/A 08/15/2008 07:04:48pm

i enjoyed this but i think it could've used a little more tension between audrey,cana,nick and joe. otherwise, great job!

Part #14 - Chapter 13: Thanks Superman...
PanicInTheAfternoon                   (User #5854) N/A 08/13/2008 08:54:29pm

umm...
hello person?

i demand more!

PanicInTheAfternoon                   (User #5854) N/A 08/11/2008 04:01:30pm

more!


hehehe

love hexagon


nice very nice

Part #13 - Chapter 12: Reliving The Past And Fighting
xloveleadstopainx                   (User #5786) N/A 07/27/2008 11:24:32pm

That was awesome! I officially love this story. And possibly the Jonas Brothers.... UPDATE SOOOOON!!!

Part #2 - Chapter 01: The Gun Fight
xloveleadstopainx                   (User #5786) N/A 07/27/2008 10:49:38pm

This actually makes the Jonas Brothers appealing... huh.
UPDATE SOON!!!

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