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Part #2 - Another Day With Simple Plan
i'm not the last but i sure ain't the first                   (User #3760) N/A 04/24/2008 12:17:19pm

hey, i think this is a good start for a story...

but it's really difficult to read when it's written like
Pierre: blahblah
Seb: blahblah [Pierre:blahblah]
you know? so my suggestion to make it a really good story is to write it like with dialogue and stuff.you can check out my stories to see how i do it if you want!

sAm

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