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jimmyfrankandbrendon                   (User #6597) N/A 10/31/2008 03:48:34pm

Please write more. it is such a awsome story

Part #25 - Not Everything Ends Well
Laura Sevenfold                   (User #5493) N/A 05/06/2008 12:30:01pm

*sniffs*
is it a bit gay that im nearly crying!!!
lolz.
love this chap so much lovey...
and ITS ME!! and mine and your birthday as in real life m'dear!
lolz
ILY=]
x

Part #24 - He Wants To Get Physical
Laura Sevenfold                   (User #5493) N/A 05/06/2008 12:26:26pm

holy shit!!!!!!!!!!
that was... erm... good...
lol
verrry detailed...
but that's how i like it lolz
LOVING THE STORY HUNNY...
ily=]
Laura

Part #23 - Zacky's Home!
Laura Sevenfold                   (User #5493) N/A 04/28/2008 01:03:15pm

awww! you feel guilty!!!
i was the same inmy story lmao!
LUVIN it as usual!
update sooonly m'dear...
ILY=]
Laura-x

O_o

Part #22 - Zacky Awakes
Laura Sevenfold                   (User #5493) N/A 04/22/2008 02:21:17pm

=O omfg!!!!!!!
i love it!
sooooo worth the wait!
update soooooonly... and i hope Zacky will be goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood as new!!!!!
ILY! =]
Laura SEVENFOLD-x

O_o

Part #21 - Oooh Jimmy
Lillith Thursday                   (User #2550) N/A 04/17/2008 12:31:36am

Gah. Love it! XD

Laura Sevenfold                   (User #5493) N/A 04/16/2008 12:20:41pm

Oooooh SCANDILOUS!
lmao
i likey this one! =]
for obvious reasons! lmao
JIMMY!!!!!!!
woooplah!
love,
Laura!
O_o
ps
POST MORE!!

Part #20 - Warmness On The Soul
Laura Sevenfold                   (User #5493) N/A 04/16/2008 12:18:22pm

oh my god! oh my god!
COME ON DUDE! FUCKING WAKE!
argh! i hope he will be okay!
*reads on*
lmao
love
Laura!
O_o

Part #8 - I Told You I Loved You Then You Go Shove It In My Face
Lillith Thursday                   (User #2550) N/A 04/13/2008 11:04:42pm

I really like this story but the chapters are a little short for me. You make it up by adding more chapters so I'm happy. Okay so here's where I have my concerns about. Jimmy said he loved her but he wasn't dating her or anything so she really shouldn't be upset by it. in my opinion anyway. Guys do that all the time. Trust me I know. On to the positive comments. Like it alot and can't wait to read the rest. I'm guessing this is one of your first stories. I once had problems writing more to the chapters but I feel that if you keep it up, you'll get a lot better at writing more words :)

Part #19 - Whats Up With Zacky?
Laura Sevenfold                   (User #5493) N/A 04/08/2008 12:21:50pm

=S what is wrong with Zacky!!!! =O
i hope its nothing bad!!!! =[
more more more more!!! lol
hehe
Loving it Kayley!!!

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