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Part #19 - Chapter 17
Jude                   (User #7746) N/A 09/06/2009 12:01:31am

You're so nice to Gerard. You like killing them, don't you?

key                    (ANONYMOUS) N/A 09/05/2009 01:49:42pm

hey! u killeded Gee!!!
eh... makes a good story but my critic is that it happened rather suddenley-
you are good at the dialouge but it might make it realistic if you described the settings more and how they change the mood
EX: the icy pain sliced through my chest (for the bullet)
and as my vision started to fade I could see the dusk starting to take over the sky, and the faces that huddled around me. I could see the undescribeable horror that was in their eyes...

u get the idea, but everyone has their own writing style and I'm no expert so feel free to disregaurd and call me a bitch :)

hopelessXXcries                   (User #6924) N/A 03/01/2009 02:49:14pm

I'm going to hunt down and kill James >_>

Poor Frakie!!!

Loves Rays Guitar                   (User #5298) N/A 03/05/2008 12:25:00pm

why must he die?!?!?!

im gonna cry now... *cries*

i love this story =]

Congratulations. You Are An Amazing Writer.

la_rue                   (User #5307) N/A 01/29/2008 04:35:38pm

awesome awesome story.
i hate this ending though! nonono! why does he have to die :(:(
otherwise its been fantastic.

EvolHexx                   (User #5356) N/A 01/25/2008 10:59:08am


XWelcomeToMyNightmareX                   (User #4334) N/A 12/06/2007 05:49:02am

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!! oh em gee! I'm speechless... Woah...

Nevaeh Lee                   (User #4761) N/A 12/03/2007 04:05:28pm

Oh man this was so freakin awesome!...
I'm sad that its over with but great job!!!
I can't wait to see what you come up with next!

Whatsername                   (User #5059) N/A 12/03/2007 03:10:00pm

It''s over!
omg, it can't be over! lol
this truly was a great story, loved every chapter.
but why did the last one have to be so sad?....-tear-
yes, congratulations on another work of art.

restinpieceslover                   (User #4332) N/A 12/03/2007 12:58:04pm


I'd cry if I had any tears left in me, but I don't since I've been crying so much
these last three weeks, you know why....

But I really feel like crying right now.

I'm going to miss this fic. A lot.
I feel like it's a child, and I've watched it grow and change.

Congratulations on another work of art.

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