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Part #4 - Chapter Three - In The Morning
Elerawr                   (User #10410) N/A 11/16/2011 05:51:37pm

please update, i know its been like 4 years since you stopped
witing but it looks really good
btw, i have never heard the word 'bladdered' used, like,
ever!

xXNat-MCRXx                   (User #6346) N/A 10/01/2008 06:10:44pm

You should update it!
ITS BEEN A FRIGGIN YEAR!
LMFAO
it's sounding really good so far, I hope you continue +)
But, heres some constructive critisizm... (hehe, I can never spell that word!)
You should use some punctuation.
It really helps in letting readers know where sentences end and makes things less confusing.
Also, you should add some more detail, instead of just skipping to things in a blur without describing what happened.
But other than that, its really good!
PLEASE CONTINUE! +)

Part #4 - Chapter Three - In The Morning
punkchick1914                   (User #4274) N/A 08/15/2007 09:23:46pm

UPDATE OR I'LL BE VERY SAD!

XWelcomeToMyNightmareX                   (User #4334) N/A 08/13/2007 05:20:23pm

Awesome story.

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