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Zilian                   (User #8026) N/A 10/14/2009 07:18:54pm

i just frizzled, exploded and died. this was so gooddddd.

Dannielle>x                   (User #4622) N/A 08/16/2007 06:18:43pm

I Love it.(:

dreamcaster555                   (User #4607) N/A 08/13/2007 02:20:16pm

That. Was. Amazing. You rule! I think their parent's reactions were common too! (However, it's too bad you didn't have them accept their kids; but then, that wouldn't have fit their personality -- so I'm happy -in a bittersweet way- that you didn't. XD) You're going on my favorite's list!

RY-SPOON lover                   (User #3309) N/A 08/06/2007 10:31:21pm

"...to the glint in Brendon's eye whenever Ryan was around, and the smile that never seemed to leave Ryan's face when Brendon sang."

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Heheh...yeah. GORGEOUS.

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“Nope. Ryan's a fucking mess. You should go talk to him. I'm gonna make a sandwich.”




“Don't eat all my dad's cheddar. He gets pissed off when it's gone and then he blames it on me, you dick.”

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ROFL. "I'm gonna go make a sandwich." SO BRENDON. xDD

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"“Hey. I was talking about the band.”

Ryan walked back to the car and crashed his lips into Brendon's, putting one hand on the back of his head to steady their kiss from their awkward position. They broke apart and Brendon looked shocked, but Ryan simply smiled.




“I know, but I wasn't.”

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Last line = perfection.

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"“Love isn't real, Ryan. I was in love with your mother. Look how well that turned out.”

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Omg. Beautiful.

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"But instead, he had settled for watching “This is Spinal Tap” for the hundredth time and eating all the Hostess snack cakes he could find."

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ROFL. That's like me on a bad day. xDD

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"Brendon Urie stood looking out his bedroom window at the warm Nevada night."

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That imagery just really stuck me. I actually pictured a sunset or something. Beautiful.

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"He jumped down the stairs, taking them two at a time like he had done when he was a kid..."

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I'm scared to do that, but that's SO Brendon. xDD

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"Brendon gasped and pulled Ryan in the house in a tight embrace, causing him to drop his bag. At first, Ryan just laid in Brendon's arms, letting himself be held by someone who loved him. Then, it seemed as if Ryan was afraid that Brendon might let go, so he hugged back, grasping at handfuls of Brendon's t-shirt, latching on to the younger boy. Brendon could hear Ryan's ragged breathing, trying to hold back tears. Ryan leaned up to Brendon's ear and Brendon could feel his hot breath as he whispered roughly.




“Don't ever think I don't love you.”


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Okay. That was probably the most gorgeous thing I've ever read in my life.

Oh my...wow.

Wow.

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“Okay, judging by the fact that you were singing `I Just Can't Wait To Be King' in your sleep, I'm going to have to say that you've seen it enough.”

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...BWAHAHAHA. XDD

I can SO picture that.

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"“Oh dah-ling, you're too kind.”

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Can picture that, too. xD


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“Ryan, can you answer that? I'm making popcorn. You can't watch The Lion King without popcorn.”

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That's the truth.

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“Go home. It's over.”




And as always, the eloquent writer hit hardest with the smallest amount of words."

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Friggin' gorgeous.

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“Don't worry. I won't be around that long.”

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Whoa. I love that line.

That WHOLE friggin' scene with Brendon & his mom was PERFECT.

Gah.

Perfect.

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"He looked at the boy next to him, jumping in the air, trying unsuccessfully to land on Jon's back and smiled. And then, he realized, he might never see that smile again."

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That made me sad; but the imagery was perfect.

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“I am home.”

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Oh. My. God.

This story couldn't have been anymore perfect.

I just...

...you blow me away.

Wow.

GAH.

I hope to gosh you're on my favorites list.

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